AsYa Two Shot : Jodi Asmaani

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Hey all the lovely people
M here to just post my weekly dose of bakwas fiction. You all are amazing that give such wonderful comments n likes that I m back evry Sunday to bore you all again n again.
Enough of my bakwas, here is the Two shot. Read at your own risk.😳



two shot : Jodi Asmaani

Asad closed his eyes and sighed in relief at last he was going home. although he loved travelling and being up in the air, but this trip had been long enough to make him long for home. and he inhaled with a sense of satisfaction and a fresh feminine summery scent made way to his nostrils, he instantly had a liking to it and his eyes flew open to follow the source of it. he turned around to his right and saw a woman seated two seats behind him, covered in her hand baggies, she looked a mess but her face got his attention. she was a sight to adore and behold. her face bare of any make up, just a dash of kohl did justice to her natural beauty.
although he wasnt the one to oogle at women, he always remained within the limits of tameez and tehzeeb, respecting women. but this girl had enchanted him, a few hair flew on her face as she was still struggling to settle down. he was brought of his gazing session by an over persistent air hostess asking him if he needed anything. and for the first time he cursed the business class seating. he always loved his space without any interruptions but he wanted to know more about her NOW. for the first time he was over eager to make an acquaintance with a woman. women had always drooled over him, but they never got a second glance by him. "chalo jee there is always a first time" he thought mentally. flight to delhi would be long enough to have a chit chat session with her.


Zyas felt weird as if somebody was staring at her. well she had caught stares often, but this time felt as if the eyes were cooking her with intensity. she looked up and here n there, but didnt find any eyes. there were only a few passengers, and they all looked over aged business types she had observed as she had made way to her seat. ok i might be imagining things, she thought and left the issue, and was about to put on her blinders to sleep when she found the pillow wasnt to her likin and she had to ask for assistance. and she called out for the air hostess.
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a sweet voice made way to his ears, somebody, a woman to be exact was talking nonstop, he was irritated because he had dozed off to sleep and hated to be awake before his preplanned time.
the voices increased, suddenly it felt like he was in the coach section. he turned around to voice his displeasure and found HER amidst quite a number of people, she was talking and all others were listening as if she was talking about something really important. she was quite a magnet that attracted people and attention towards her, he thought. he stood up to stretching himself now was the time for action. he moved slowly towards her to get more knowledge of the story she was sharing with such intent listeners.

zoya was explaining something about Indian wedding, her hands moving as she spoke and he noticed they were adorned with mehndi. was she married or talking about her wedding' asad's hopes dashed on ground from such high altitude, he had thought and taken it a bit seriously that he felt kind of bad that he was late or more because the first woman he wanted to like to know was already committed.
he was about to move back when her gaze stopped on him, and held his eyes. she broke away in an instant, but her eyes came back on him. she was awestruck by him, he was a perfect armani cover page model look alike, sharp features and impeccably dressed in white shirt and brown trousers, how did she miss him before, she facepalmed herself mentally. he was about to leave when she unconsciously spoke to stop him, "listen guys a handsome man joined us and we didnt even know it" chirping as if all others were her college buddies.
Asad stood rooted at his spot, he had been called handsome by her, well a married or committed woman wasn't likely make a comment like this, he was amused by her. everything about her seemed captivating. and he was ready to know even more now.


To be continued...
Next part solely depends on the feed back, so do let me know if I should continue it or not.


Time for aspirin, guys apologies for making you an aspirin addict 😆

Rocks n criticism

Ankiewa this is for you as you were bored, so I thought of boring the hell out of you😉



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Posted: 12 years ago
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bahut hi chota hai -_________-

Next part? 😭
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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bahut hi chota hai -_________-

Next part? 😭


Next part remains to be decided. Everything lies in the hands of the readers😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really nice Saba! 😃 Quite interesting. Would love to read more.
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Originally posted by: s120

This is really nice Saba! 😃 Quite interesting. Would love to read more.

Thanks shreya😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! Its really very nice...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i sooo loved u'r update .. ur writing style

very well reciprocated 2 what asad and zoya were feeling

... i thoroughly enjoyed ur writing ... definitely awaiting for the 2nd part ...
[ in short loved u'r update!!!! ❤️]

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next part next part 😳
P.s: i loved it 😊
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very nice please continue it :)
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Super Duper Awesome!

Me want Next Part ASAP!

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