AsYa Two Shot : Jodi Asmaani - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice ...waiting for next part...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it!!!! Please continue!!! So unique! Love it! And PM me!! Thank youu :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice...pls update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was something different! I haven't read an AsYa fiction which is not based on the current plot, so yeah, this was refreshing!
I especially loved how you have given Asad's POV about Zoya. The way he describes her, it reminds me of their first meeting in the mosque(good ole days!)

Then his disappointment at assuming that Zoya is probably going to get married made me go 'Awww...'

But the best part was when she attempts to stop him from going back to his seat!😆

I hope there is more to this story! Thanks for PM-ing me about it!😊

P.S: There are punctuation errors. If you have the time to edit it, correct them but other than that, I am out of complaints😆 I know you are busy with stuff so do it when you have time!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue soon
Amazing
Cant believe u stopped ther
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nshah21888

please continue... its really good... :)


Thank you dear will try to update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey this is really great!!! but inna chhota!!! please continue fast!! i really wanna know what happens next!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!!! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome yaar
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice my dear buddy...

m luking fr nxt part

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