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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is really nice!!! plz continue! i dont want zoe gettin married to some1 else!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Nice, Blue.😊

please continue...Why does Zoya have mehendi on her hands?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
It was vry interestng saba🤗
do love to read more😃
cont sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
U should definitely continue dear :))
I hope that he will join them.
N plz zoya is not married..
The part wasn't that long so I'm hoping for a next update soon :p pm me when u update :) thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Very interesting ...
Plzzz cont it... Want next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Devanshi-

That was something different! I haven't read an AsYa fiction which is not based on the current plot, so yeah, this was refreshing!

I especially loved how you have given Asad's POV about Zoya. The way he describes her, it reminds me of their first meeting in the mosque(good ole days!)

Then his disappointment at assuming that Zoya is probably going to get married made me go 'Awww...'

But the best part was when she attempts to stop him from going back to his seat!😆

I hope there is more to this story! Thanks for PM-ing me about it!😊

P.S: There are punctuation errors. If you have the time to edit it, correct them but other than that, I am out of complaints😆 I know you are busy with stuff so do it when you have time!


Hey devanshi,
Glad to see your long wala comment. A super comment Issey kehte hain.
M glad you liked it and your review shows how intently you read it, that you noticed the punctuation errors. Thank you for pointing out.
M trying to sneak in forums despite hectic schedule, I hope you understand.

Regards
Bluey
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Nice, Blue.😊


please continue...Why does Zoya have mehendi on her hands?


Thanks soup.
Will try to update soon, as for your query that remains to be unfolded 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ..Ghazz..

It was vry interestng saba🤗
do love to read more😃

cont sooonnn


Thank you dear.
M glad you liked it.
Will try to update soon.

P.s- have we talked before because you know my name but m clueless about you😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
it was really nice...u HAVE to continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls continue soon...i like it...asad..bechara hamesha apne ap se bate krta rehta hain..
play a song for him..from golmal -agar hum hote toh bol diya hota-ajaydevgan line (kyun age piche dolte ho bavro ki tarh)

pari

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