FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80 - Page 48

Originally posted by: wreeti

I think you should be a writer for our tv serials, that way we would be able to see serials with better story line and more logic.

For someone who does not know networking - a quick question that comes in mind is why can asad see the feed from webcam when the main power is plugged out, and then you explain it. There are no loopholes in the story and its brilliantly thought. 👏

Also love the fact how Asad responds to Malak when he finds him. They have obvious tension between them because of the tug 'o war they are playing on Zoya, but Asad realizes that Malak is Zoya's well wisher and she would be worried about him once she is fine.

Love the update, also the cliffhanger...😲

I can not believe you are not trained computer expert and I surely don't underestimate girl power and I have bowed down to your writing abilities from first update only and it was really jaw dropping every sentence filled with excitement and asad the superhero is there and what was the bang about I hope zoya is fine and asad saves her

Why would you leave it there? I was at the edge of my seat throughout! Please update soon before I die of excitement and anticipation!

here comes my hero...ASAD AHMED KHAN..aab tera kya hoga ..TEJ/...he will kill u , ctush u like paper...u dare to touch zoya...

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amazing update! did u research for all the hacking info u get in ur story or is this ur own knowledge? and u pay attention to every single detail! the ending was so breathtaking! please update soon: can't wait to see what happens next!

I really think this is the best ff I have read till now...hats off!!!