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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

he you cant eat cake all by yourself. .

mindblowing and speechless update. .

her backbone...malak poisoned..mr nair hurt..

aasadnot hherboyfriend...but will not spare them..

he alone took down 3 guys empty hand...

asad tells malak to go to hospital. ..

as zoya needs to be answered. .

asad on for dev...one down 2 to go..

gun shot..phone dead..

thanxs for the pm

Edited by rajnid68 - 11 years ago

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

u are absolutely a brillant writer... No doubtsss!!

U sud writeee moreee..like in professionally

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

you are just awesommme.update soon

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Ohh my god !!!!!
i'm totally speechless by your writing skills!! 👏

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Loved it!

You really need to write books and publish like real bad.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Wow...what can I say about your writing?

It's just bloody BRILLIANT. As a reader, I can totally see how much you are in command of your story line. The plot is well-constructed, the pace, just...right , and gripping characterization.

Kudos. And waiting for the next one. Cliffhangers are just unbearable.

And thanks for the PM.

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

OMG

The best best update Eva

I was so glued to my phone until I finished every single line of it

Amazingly written superb job

Ur an amazingly talented writer. Hats off to u

Just supeeb I don't have words to tell u how much I enjoyed it

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Oh my god, please don't let him shoot Zoya, please God, let Asad reach on time to save her!! Wow, just when i thought everything was going to be fine, you left it like that!! Please update soon, i can't wait to read on and find out where that bullet landed!! This is BRILL, thank you for this GREAT update and for the pm!! Thanks!! By the way, have i ever told you that you're AMAZING?! Well... you are!! x

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

That was amazing loved Asad protecting Zoya thanx for the PM and update soon :D:D:D

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

Did I comment earlier? I think I did but not quite sure :-)

but what the heck, loved the update so much that its worth commenting a second time!

I love this all macho Asad out to destroy anyone who even dreams of touching his lady love but more than that, loved Zoya's calm acceptance and expectation that Asad would not leave them in one piece now that they have dared to touch her!