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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

OMG you are brilliant , I am speechless, amazing, rocking update, you should write professionally, superb.. Please update soon, can't wait for the next one..

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Paly, after chat we had that day I appreciate this chapter a the more

Now that I know what effort you have put in if

I love it all the more

No wonder it was flawless

Just like my favourite novels

To be precise 'Harry Potter' novels

And mind it I am a die hard fan of them

And its the best compliment i can give

And you deserve it

This chapter was fab

The way you described every stuff

Fantastic

Wish to buy your books soon

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sheilasandhu

@sheilasandhu

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Superb update yaar. Another cliffhanger and i cant wait to read your next update.👏👏

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Too many cliffies for me---please update fast!

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

You're an amazing writer!! I know you've heard it a thousand times but still I need to tell you that... because each one of your update is a treat to read... it shows in your updates how much time n energy you put into writing... that commitment needs to be appreciated...
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this part... you explained everything so perfectly n graphically that a no techie like me was able to understand everything perfectly... n I believe that's an achievement for a writer that he/she is able to make her readers understand...
Keep up the good work... I always look forward to your updates...

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Yaar it ws amezing. Like Ankie said y dont u write prafessionaly?

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Oh, my so theirs the mangalpuri update. I was so waiting for this one. And the next update. Can't wait. I hope zoya is not hurt. But love to see Asad in all angry young man mode. He is so sexy in that avatar. And, zoya is really a very brave girl. Its beauty with brains..

continue soon.

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#468

wow...fantabulous 👏

excellently written...details are amazing...

cant wait

conti soon

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#469

You are an awesome writer 👏

I just love the story ... amazing!!!!! ❤️ ❤️

Zoya is very smart...

and Asad is true lion... OMG!!!!

super!!!

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wreeti

@wreeti

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#470

I think you should be a writer for our tv serials, that way we would be able to see serials with better story line and more logic.

For someone who does not know networking - a quick question that comes in mind is why can asad see the feed from webcam when the main power is plugged out, and then you explain it. There are no loopholes in the story and its brilliantly thought. 👏

Also love the fact how Asad responds to Malak when he finds him. They have obvious tension between them because of the tug 'o war they are playing on Zoya, but Asad realizes that Malak is Zoya's well wisher and she would be worried about him once she is fine.

Love the update, also the cliffhanger...😲

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