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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

To be honest, I know very little about hacking and stuff. I'm very impressed with the details you've put into the story. It's convincing and it doesn't make Zoya look like a brainless girl.

She's good. But I can sense what's wrong. I think I have a distinct idea as to who removed the files.

Until next time! 😃

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

waoo..a long & good one update after long time...really good one...thnks 4 d pm

pari

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Finally you updated!

Absolutely loved it to bits!! Asad's giving the coke can and his shirt to Zoya were the best parts! 👏

I can't wait for the next chapter. Continue soon! 👍🏼

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

hey tis is superb...totally luv it...amazing...

luv the way asad gave his shirt to zoya to change to n hw much he care for zoya...

really great update...beautifully written...wow luv the mother n son talk n hw realise hw much he care for zoya...thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soo n eagerly waiting for the next part...

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daisydee425

@daisydee425

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

amazing update
loved it
thnks for pm

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...SankaDevi...

@...SankaDevi...

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

I loved it! 😳

Update often:)

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wreeti

@wreeti

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Hi, loved the part. It would be good to see asad change his ways for zoya. The character development is great and with proper reason. This story has more logic than the actual serial. Great job.

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Asad stares at his mother, struggling to understand what she was saying. Zoya couldn't leave them. She couldn't take her silly quotes, her easy laughter and her boundless energy from their lives. He, Dilshad and Najma had been living in shadows before she'd come and dragged them into the sunshine. How could they ever go back to the darkness now that they'd basked in the light?

Lovely...U R a wonderful writer- the best on our forum👏

I hope your private problems have been sorted out in your favour.😊

Your story is so gripping and complete and totally in line with the characters...and superb background research.👏 Something to really look forward on our weekends. THANK YOU.