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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

it was soo friggin' cute of Asad :D

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Glambi89

@Glambi89

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

HOLYSHIT!!! I was reading your AMAZING FF when a 6.9 earthquake struck ... Made me dive straight under the table. Your FF is forever going to be embedded in my mind with the earthquake.

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Your story has me completely gripped.

That's all I can say.

The way you write is so completely awesome.

I got sucked into the lives of the characters.

Oh and also, I like your Asad wayyy better than the TV one.

What wouldn't I do to have a man as crazy and protective of me as he is of Zoya. *sigh*

Update soon.

Richa

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

wow...awesome update

loved it...

u shuld update frequently... i missed it so much...😳

loved asad...he is a little less emotionally challenged...

he said that he doesnt want zoya to go...aww...

if it's the asad in the shw..it wuld take him a milinieum to say that

"The things I do for you, Ms. Farooqui,"

conti soon

waiting for more asya scenes

i dnt want malak..😭😆

thnx for pm

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starsinmyeyes

@starsinmyeyes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

I have been so eagerly waiting for the update...Web of lies in the most crisply written story on this forum...it could be made into a film really...u are a gifted writer👏

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

after a long time finally you updated & i'm so glad !
such a lovely update !
thank you for this sweet chapter !
love you dear !

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tvpremi

@tvpremi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

I loved the update...its amazing. ...now asad realizes his mistake n is trust trying to make it up to her...plz continue soon...thanks for pm...

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

I just loved the way Dilshad tried to put sense into Asad... but Asad mistook it for Zoya leaving his house... can't blame him... even I thought Dilshad was talking about Zoya leaving n was wondering why was she saying it...
The misunderstanding had one good side... Asad was able to see n understand what Zoya really meant to him n his family...
The way Asad tried to bring down the wall between him n Zoya was cute n a big step for the health conscious OCD man he is...
Aww!! Asad gave his shirt to Zoya... I loved how Asad's employees liked Zoya so much...
This update was so amazing n wonderful!! Good part was that there was no direct Malak!! Can't stand the guy!!!
Update when you can n do pm me... :)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Hey!

I am a new reader to your FF..and I loved it..You are one amazing writer..

Also let me know of your other works..

Plz pm when there is an update..also sent a buddy request..

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Hey, an update... I am so happy and jumping and bouncing out of happiness. I have been waiting for the update for ages. And, here it is... And, I loved it... Dilshad moma is the best.. The way she confronts Asad's. Asad's insecurities and the fear that gripped him when Dilu.. Moma asked zoya should leave. And, the relief that passed him when he finally got to know she ain't leaving.

Asad shirt less.. Umm.. I was all of a sudden Fan girling.. As in I don't do it always.. Whenever it comes to Asad I am always fan girling. Whooo.. I could imagine his six packs.. The most amazing sight to behold..😳😆

I am so eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds.. I love Mangalpuri Asad and zoya...or the Gusphind Asad and zoya.. I am so very excited... Please continue asap.

Dee

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