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deziqt611

@deziqt611

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Awesome chapter!!!!!! Thank you so much for the pm!!!

Edited by deziqt611 - 12 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Absolutely loved the gamut of emotions presented in this chapter.

Be it the sheer anguish of Asad's, the despair of Zoe, the motherhood of Dilshad, the camaraderie between A and Z...everything was so beautifully suggested.

Intrigued by the professional hassles Z is facing. Is there more than what meets the eye?

Waiting for the next update:)

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Nice asad coming terms with his emo behave...

i like what Dil did... awesome..

waiting for the next update...

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snehasya

@snehasya

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

hey girl I just love this work of yours, asad zoya the whole fiasco, her explanations his caring naure and dilshads love and care and you bind it all together to make a perfect update . the way zoya holds her self presents herself without loosing ounce of her selfrespect but at the same time not showing off the pride its just wonderful how you show the difference and asad being emotionally challenged but in his own way kinda unique and he is adorable but realises his mistake and ready for new ones so he can be around his zoya aweee girl I can write piles and piles but it wont end and even zoyas scanning system wont able to fix it 😉 also I want to mention the hardwork ou put in for all that research when you write that small detailing is just awesome and thanks a ton for pm they really help .👍🏼

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Wow, talk about monster update! 😲
That was super-long! 👍🏼
Awesomeee! 👏
Love how Asad took off his shirt and gave it to Zoe! 😉 😆
So cuteee! 😳
Update soon! 😛
-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Nai

@zoas91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

loved the chapter!!!! the chapter did justice to the essence of asad and zoya!! cheers! thanks for the pm!

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

A wonderfull up-date...and a Malak-free up-date is always Awesome...😆

The way he has start saying "Allah miya" is very cute...one of the thing that shows just HOW much she has affected his life...Him leaving 10 massages for her also on the landline is so Cute...his "Just let me know your safe" shows how much he fears losing her...

Dilshad and his conversion was overwhelming...shows how much she is protective over her and how much he is at lost of his words when he think she is talking about Zoya leaving KH...He is so ready to defend him and give every and any explanation that will make Dilshaad see that Zoya NOT leaving in their home and bas...And when he realizes that she is only talking about Zoya not working at his office anymore, he nearly cried from relief...and when Dilshaad gets to know about that all this defance talking about Zoya-is-not-leaving-and-Bas is not about Zoya working in his office but about Zoya leaving their home, I wonder HOW come Dilshaad cant see that her son wants Zoya in their life..that somewhere along the way he has started loving having Zoya around him, them...

Haha, I loved the way he feels about Malak...Even though I dont like that man at all...But after he came in Asya's life, Asad has started to make sure Zoya is happy and comfortable and doesnt feel the need to leave him and go away somewhere else...He has given a fear to Asad that is somehow good for Asya...Its because of him that Asad has started to acknowledge the fact that if he is the brain of their family/home, she is the soul of their family/home...Its because of him that Asad now KNOWS that she is making him feel Alive, before her he was only living and now he is ALIVE, and now if she leaves he will be in worse conditions then he was before her...If she leaves, he wont be able to even live, let alone feel Alive...

I loved how he takes a soda for her...It looked like an offer, the way that ancient people did ages before when they thought that their Gods were angry at them...🤣 But that was so sweet of him...😳

"She has full authority. Give her anything and everything she wants." that was his way of saying sorry in front of his employees, without losing his pride as a boss, and giving her the respect she deserves, that was his way of saying her that she doesn't need to feel humiliated...Doing this all Without saying "Sorry"...He is sure is an intelligent man...A man of actions...A man of only some words, but even his some words has A lot of power...

Did someone messed-up with the setup of GHOST IN THE MACHINE...?? I cant understand anything about these new technologies, maybe thats why any thing that goes wrong my finger points at Malak and Co...Maybe that is also because I feel that anything that bad happens with,around or to Asya, is Malaks fault...😆

Asad giving Zoya his shirt was out-of-this-world thing...The conversion between them is so completely Asya-ish...I just Loved that part...Her laughing about it and his not minding her...Love the way he feels content after Zoya in her way assured him that she is not going anywhere...

All in all This up-date was AWESome...just Loved it...😳

Edited by A.Hajnal - 12 years ago

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braich_gal

@braich_gal

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

This is awesome!!! simply awesome!!! Please update ASAP!!!! and send me a pm when you update...i love this story...and the prequel as well...gonna check out your other stories now!!!

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JJN

@JJyoN

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

It's been too long, but an amazing update. I love it. Imagine if this happened on the actual show. Asad shirtless in his office ;) Their bickering was hilarious also.

Love Dilshaad. She's awesome!

You are a terrific writer.

Edited by Azriya - 12 years ago