FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80

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friendsall

@friendsall

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

hey dats a cute one!!!!

u write so well n I hope things r OK at ur end!!!

take care n keep writing🤗

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

hey Paly

i see you finally updated

thanks for that

so that was a great chapter

the conversation between Dilshad and Asad was nice, but the littlest bit confusing, but by the end i got the point

and loved that Asad realised that he doesn't want Zoya to leave

Asad's worry for the duration of Zoya's absence was nice to see

good to know he cares so much😉

and loved that Asad took the initiative to try and resolve things with Zoya

the soda and offering his help is a good start, but he has a long way to go

and who knew Mr. Khan kept a stash of soda?😲

i certainly didn't😆

what's next pizza for lunch??😆

and loved how Asad said that Zoya hnd full authority in his office

the guy's clearly trying

and ooohhh i'd have loved to see the expressions on Zoya's face when Asad was removing his shirt, and that of his staff when they saw him with just a vest and jacket😆🤣

and loved the last few lines

and indeed the things Asad has to do for his Ms. Farooqui😆

very gentlemanly of him though😆

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

Edited by amri123 - 12 years ago

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

This was worth the wait. You describe all the the emotions so well. And I loved the bit of comedy in there. Hopefully the next update is not too far away. Great chapter. 😊

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paagal_

@paagal_

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Amazing update loved it! continue soon

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Finally you have updated eh

I stalked it like crazy

Loved the update

Awosome job

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Finally you updated!!! I loved this part and the ending!😆

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Hope you resolved your personal issues and everything is fine with you. 🤗

Thank you for a great update. You are a terrific writer and I love your FF!

Poor Asad does not realize he can't run away from his feelings for Zoya! Loved his conversation with Dilshaad. His tension at Zoya leaving was palpable. Bechaara!!

Wow, he gave Zoya full authority! Awesome! Now, what's the mystery of the missing file? I wonder if there is a double crosser / spy in Asad's office? Future updates will shed light! Glad that at least temporarily Zoya is in Asad's office and is safe! Her protector is with her. But who will protect his heart?!

The part about Asad undressing and giving Zoya his shirt and the staff and Zoya then giggling was very cute!! Truly, Asad is the bechaara!!

He gave her diet coke. What next? Pizza for the whole staff? And he will help sort the paperwork! Aww, how sweet is the Akdu?!

Look forward to your next update!

👏 👏 👏

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

nyc play of emotions. Gr8 work

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

YAY u finally updated thanx for the PM and update soon can't wait :D:D:D

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Hey Paly! 😃 Okay so firstly, the only positive thing about the painfully long wait was the extra-long, awesome-as-always chapter we got - I love, love, loved it! I'd like to mention that you interweave the flashbacks in the story so beautifully! Seriously, for me, this is the best FF I've read on this forum - not just on the QH forum, but on the whole of IF itself! The fact that your FFs have great characterization, excellent grammar and punctuation, intriguing plots and wonderful dialogues that stay true to the real characters, makes them a delight to read.

Oh Lawd, I'm loving the progress in Asad and Zoya's relationship! Whether Mr. Khan admits it or not, he has become attached to his Musibat 😆 And wow, the mere mention of Zoya's friend Malak is rage-inducing for Mr. Khan 😃 Gah! I just love where this story is going!

I hope the next update comes sooner but no pressure 😆 This kind of writing is well worth the wait!