AsYa:I am jealous Ms. Farroukhi Updtd Part 7 Pg 33 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
The shopping spree that Asad and Zoya had was really cute. Can't wait to see what Gayathri has planned for Tanveer !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
asya spent the whole day with each other without any interuption...gee planning something for billi...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maza aagya!
Shw mein na sahi yaahaan toh hum billo ki band baja akate hai🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update Yaar... Continue Soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb! Loved the shopping spree of asad and zoya..they r so cute together..great compliment about Asad's attire by himself since it was chosen by zoya.

What is gyatri's actual profession? I wonder what she has planned for Tanveer..

Post soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part VI: Zoya accused of cheating'

I am very, very impatient with the current track'

Two days before the nikah:

The Khan Household was filled with happiness and joy. Zoya was still in pain after the Acid mehendi but she had forgotten it as Mr. Khan was taking such good care of her. She thought it was worth it. Asad was pained at Zoya's pain. She had endured for him. His heart ached to hold her hands and kiss away the pain. Gayatri was fuming and had pretty much decided that she would not spare Tanveer. This time Tanveer had escaped but not anymore. The plan had been set in motion.

The doorbell rang and Najma ran to open it. There stood Daniel, looking resplendent in a sherwani. Najma welcomed him. Zoya ran and hugged him. Asad fumed. Tanveer realized that she had two days to poison Asad's mind. Zoya had no time for Asad. She was busy with the pre wedding rituals and Danish or Daniel. Asad was so jealous. Tanveer was trying to gain Asad's attention but she was failing. Every time she tried to approach Asad, Gayatri would interrupt (just like Tanveer used to interrupt Asad and Zoya). Asad had grown close to Gayatri. He decided to request her help to confess his feelings to Zoya.

At night:

Gayatri was sitting on the grass enjoying the view. Zoya was asleep and Dan had returned to the hotel after his act. He had warned Gayatri to wrap up soon as he did not want Asad to kill him. And Dan was missing Gayatri a lot. Just then she felt a presence behind her and turned to see Asad with coffee. In the last few days, Gayatri and Asad had bonded making Zoya very happy. Asad handed Gayatri coffee and sat next to her on the grass.

G-A: Asad, Thanks for the coffee. I wanted to hot cuppa to clear my mind. There are too many things to sort and make happen.

A-G: I hope you like my coffee. Ms. Farroukhi dislikes it. She calls it black and bitter and reminds her of the coffee drinker. I cannot understand her fondness for sugar and milk.

G-A: Asad, coffee is like a relationship. It is a combination of ingredients: bitter, white, black, and sweet. Zoya is the kind of person who likes to see the good (white) and loves to sweeten relationships (sugar). She likes her coffee as is yet she will not force a person to change. In your case, she has learnt to make coffee your way as she likes you as is. She does not forcibly change a person. Her attitude is Live and Let Live. I know, you find her childish, immature and crazy but trust me Asad it is her way of hiding her pain and anguish. She cannot watch people especially the ones she loves and cares go through the pain. I agree her means are warped but if the means justify the end, she give two hoots about the world. Asad, if she has taken the blame and gone through the pain for you'it means she loves you. She will not admit as she is quite the romantic.

Asad smiled. He thought about the secret agent incident.

A-G: I have seen a lot of pain. I do not believe in relationships as my father deserted Ammi and then separated my brother Ayaan from me. My father hurt me bad and I am scared that I would do the same to Ms. Farroukhi. I cannot trust anyone. Gayatri, I, I, I lllooo

G-A: Asad, her name is Zoya and you love her. I get it but do you trust her? Imagine, if tomorrow Tanveer accuses Zoya of wrong doing, who would you support?

Asad looked at Gayatri stunned. He had no response.

G-A: Love is incomplete without Trust. Please remember Zoya trusts you with her life and if she had to make a choice between you and say me, she would choose YOU. It would hurt her but she would still choose you provided you are right. What would you do? When you get the answer to that, then you will not hesitate to confess your feelings.

Gayatri stood up and walked into the house. Asad was deep in thought. Gayatri felt Asad was struggling with his emotions. He was in pain just as Zoya. They were soul mates.

Next morning: 24 hours before the Nikah

Tanveer saw Daniel in Zoya's room and kissing someone. Tanveer realized this was her moment. She screamed. On hearing Tannu, Asad ran out of the room. Amidst the confusion, no one noticed Zoya coming in after her jog. Tanveer rushed to Asad.

T-A: Jammy, I saw Zoya kissing her friend Daniel. She is cheating on you Jammy. Kala, I kept screaming that Jammy was not serious about the nikah. Zoya is not the right girl for him. She and American ways will not fit the family.

Dilshad refused to believe Tanveer and said so. But Asad was confused. In his mind, Tanveer was right but his heart refused to believe Tanveer. But Tanveer would not lie. She was his child-hood friend. Zoya was dumb struck at the accusation. Tanveer was going out of the way to stop the Nikah. Zoya had not been able to figure out the reason. On one hand, she wanted to scream at Mr. Khan and on the other hand, she wanted to assess his response. Asad glared at Daniel. He walked up to him and said:

A-D: Do you love Zoya?

D-A: Yes. I love her very, very much.

A-D: Did you kiss her as Tanveer mentioned?

Daniel was shocked; Zoya had tears that Mr. Khan could even believe Tanveer.

D-A: What do you think? Do you think you're future wife will cheat on you? Dude, do you not trust her? Answer me?

A-D: I asked you the question. So, you answer me. Did you or did you not kiss Zoya? I do not think Zoya will cheat on me but I also believe that Tanveer will not lie.

Before Daniel could respond Gayatri stepped in.

G-A: Interesting Asad. Let me set the facts straight then. You might think that Zoya will not cheat but I assure you that she will not cheat on you. You might NOT TRUST ZOYA BUT I TRUST ZOYA AND DAMIAN WITH MY LIFE.

Asad confused: Who is Damian?

Gayatri to all: Everyone, please meet my husband and Zoya's brother Dr. Damian Donald. And I am NOT a teacher but a lawyer. He acted as Daniel as we wanted to ensure Zoya's choice in her life partner was correct but it seems like she missed a lot. Asad, remember I asked you: WHO WOULD YOU CHOOSE?

Zoya in tears spoke up: Mr. Khan would CHOOSE TANVEER.

For first time, all realized her presence and sensed her hurt. Asad turned to Zoya and realized that she was out jogging. Tanveer had played dirty BUT WHY??

Gayatri realized that it was time to reveal Tanveer's truth with evidence''..

(Hope you enjoyed it. Final part soon)

Edited by UK_VS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no cliffy...
continue soon. plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
unrs...

Just read all the parts..
Ghosh..its superbbb..
But even after so many incidents asad didnt trust zoya...my bad...shiitt..how hurt the gal is..waiting fr the next part :D
Edited by nits_viratholic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cliffy???!!! Why??!!!!!
P.S: I am a silent reader of all your works. I love them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhh.. this was sooo amazing..

Cliff hanger... Cant wait..

But i love the way you write... Ua truly talented... Pleeesee cont sooon... (:

I love the last line of part 5...

Looveddd ittt...

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