SS:Ajmer mein Mangalpur!-LAST PART UPDATED pg-34!!

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pixie_n

@pixie_n

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

simply beautiful..u have penned down each and every word so beautifully<3

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

awesome... please try continue it or sequel

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Loved loved loved it. Brilliantly written i wish there were more parts! But looking forward to more stories from you. You write beautifully. Hayeee! The nikaaah happend hahaha if only that happened in the show.

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Wpw..awesum..luvd it...gr8...its was a awesum fg..luvd it..thnkd 4 pm..fo pm me if u write anythng rlse

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

NYC one yr
Perfect
ESP d last line
Ammi vo bechari nahi hai...

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Tanupreet Kaur

@Aphroditefallen

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

awsum is d word for u.. god bless u sweetheart..:)

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

superb part
thanks for the pm

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nknaini

@nknaini

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

wow superb ending u totally give justice to it but a little sad that the story ends.

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Read the whole story in one go.
It was really good. Should write more in future.

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

waoo..wht an end...asad-zoya together...kash serial mein bhi esa ho...bas in dono ka nigah ho jaye..chahe uske baad tom-jerry ki tarah yeh ladte rhe..no problem..b ut atleast they should be together...thnks 4 d awesome end dear..& $ d Pm too...

pari