AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1! - Page 69

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Res.

First of all, sorry for such a late unres. You have no idea how I've been squirming all that while wanting to read it. Although i'm loving being away from home, I don't even have the time to take my phone out *sighs*

Dedication? *criesss* and i'm one of the last to comment. So sorry! Thank you soo soo soo much, I feel so special! *blushes* ( on my phone, failing with the emoticans)

And OMG! I absolutely adore this story! The tour was amazing, being the OCD freak that he is, I actually felt his discomfort yet him trying his best to stay calm and normal for her. GIRLL, I forgave him there and then. No more torture pleaseee! You are an amazing writer, and that's why I totally understood every emotion you put into this.

Okay, I think i'm the only one that feels sorry for him, although I did smile devilishly with Zoya.
I enjoyed the stair scene and his little prep talk. Bless the poor soul, mujhe yeh dekha nahi ja rahi hai, loool and i'm glad he noticed how she covers herself compared to other indian girls. Finally, I don't have to hammer his head in!

Lmfaooo! The best bit had to be her friends seducing him, poor soul I actually was sweating for him... Because i know he's not like that! Loved that bit, great addition my love. I've always wanted to see how her friends interact with her Mr Khan. I'm so glad they'll help her out. But the pizza scene was soo evil.
Ahhh, I love this chapter lovely, I'm not a New Yorker or anything... So I enjoyed every bit of this, I could imagine everything right in front of my eyes. It made me want to fly there right there and then, UK isn't so exciting anymore! This made me feel like I was watching a movie and i didn't want to come out of that dream world.

You are a fabulous writer and yet again you left me speechless. I had weird tingles in my stomach reading the whole thing. *sighs*
Okaay pleaseee don't let it be too big of a twist. Although I would enjoy a jealous track, I've already forgiven him in this chapter! I would dread seeing her get comfy with another hunk, but but i guess he needs a taste of his own medicine! Soo looking forward to it.

Once again, thank you for the dedication and for such an amazing chapter. I la love ittt! Keeep up the beautiful work, you rockkk!! Me loves loves loves! Continue sooon pleasseee.
I will try my best to comment first next time but doubt anything for the next 2 weeks :(!
Waiting very impatiently for the next part, thank you so much for the PM.
Much lovesss xoxo

P.S i'm bad with reviews. So end note: loved ittt!

Originally posted by: amri123

hey

that was great

a really awesome read

i loved the part where Asad saw the difference between Zoya and the girls 👏

they're totally different even though they grew up in the same city

and i loved that Asad tried to be friendly for Zoya's sake

the man is clearly trying to rectify his mistake

and i cant believe Zoya did that to him😆

i enjoyed that alot as well

and what happened at the end?

continue soon so i can find out

and thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

Tanveer get out from AsYa's life you dirty one eyed bitch. Kutte ki maut maregi Kamini. Exit ho ja unki life se WARNA main tujhe iss duniya se Exit karvadungi... Samjhi ya samjhaun

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Very interesting. Loved it so much. I like this Asad and also Zoya's friends.

New twist?!! Should I be scared?

Will wait for ur update. Update soon.