AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1!

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Peppy

@darkangel93

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

oh GOD! episode me bhi asad ka gussa... yahaan bhi asad ka gussa... i'll go into depression, by the end of the day! 😆 poor zoya!!! koi toh rehem karo uss par!!! lovely update dear, though it was heartbreaking... now i want a SOLID waala redemption track!! not like the disconnected and sudden ones, as shown in the show... dont let zoya forgive him so easily!!! thnx a lot for the pm!! 😊

Quote

canadiankudi

@canadiankudi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Amazing update!!! I'm glad Zoya slapped Asad.. hopefully that puts some sense into him!! Update soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: januable_sammy
This is truly a beautiful piece... the dialogues, the actions, the Urdu. Spot on, girl! It's like an alternative Qubool Hai world you have created to help people get through the weekend. Kudos to you for that. I read all four parts in one go! Coming to Chapter 4, woot woot! Zoya slapped him! You go girl! He deserves it. I would like a Dilshaad-Asad conversation though, because Asad's words were hurtful but they were (however marginally) justified. He values his Ammi so dearly that he didn't even attend his kid brother's engagement. So, yeahh make him suffer from Zoya's side (we all know how much he deserves that), but losing his Ammi's support might be a tad bit too harsh. Once again, you have an amazing talent! Keep writing, and I'll be stalking this thread for chapter 5 😊

Love,
Jazzy

You're a sweetheart! Thank you so much for your kind words :) Yes I do plan on having Dilshad talk to him :) Not sure if that'll be how he realizes his feelings. But still playing around with that part. True, his values do force him to do things. BUt he does need to learn when to throw those things out the window once in a while :) I'm so glad you like it though. I'm overwhelmed with all the response :)

I was especially worried about the urdu and hindi haha because It's not my first language =P

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

Quote

suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Amazing updte...i dnt understand y asad has 2 be so judgemental...?!? 4 once cant he jst be abit calm n listen 2 zoya...plz updte soon...u r writin fab...each updte seems 2 be mre interestin dan the previous 1...curious 2 knw wat happens nxt

Quote

Vaishnavi

@vaishnavi31

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

yarr this was soo gooddd.. i was in tear from todays episode and this continued them sometiems i wish Zoya would really slap Asad 😆 anys great update and thanks for the pm😉 cant wait for next update👍🏼

Quote

Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Loved the slap!!! I want Zoya to slap him in the show too!! Also Tanveer should get slapped too ...I really wanna slap her but nooo xD Can't xD LOL Loved it!!

Quote

Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

i actually loved this line : "Khuda ka shukar ki aapke abuu aaj zinda nahin hain, une aap par zaroor sharam aati agar une yeh din dekne par the!"

Asad apne kyun nahi kaha aaj? :P

Waiting for the update! 😳

Quote

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: irock321
Loved the slap!!! I want Zoya to slap him in the show too!! Also Tanveer should get slapped too ...I really wanna slap her but nooo xD Can't xD LOL Loved it!!

Haha my thoughts exactly. You actually made me realize I forgot to include Tanveer in this whole debacle. =P