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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wow...beautiful updte...i guess nxt updte is gonna be mre happening n ful of asya...updte asap

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: enrique
This was so touching

I was feeling to stop zo my self but I no mr khan will do it

Plzzz update soon

I am loving this more than the show

It's amazing ...and really heart pleasing to read and

Heart wrenching to read Zoe' pain

Wow thanks :) I really appreciate that 😳

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: blueflames
loved it loved it...
supperrr see bhiii uppparrr thaaa last part...👏👏
read it all in a go, and i have no regrets straining my eyes 😉😆

do update sooon.

P.S- i unresd on page 1 too 😳

Aww thanks :) You don't think I should've included Tanveer? I mean I don't see what she could possibly do. She's already created the biggest MU possible. But I really didn't wanna ruin the scenes with the imaginary "MEOWWW" LOL 🤣

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: mochhug

Aww thanks :) You don't think I should've included Tanveer? I mean I don't see what she could possibly do. She's already created the biggest MU possible. But I really didn't wanna ruin the scenes with the imaginary "MEOWWW" LOL 🤣

i hate that manhoos billli and her yuck "meooww"🤢

i love you for not including her.😳

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Geetha

@Geet_Ha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Please please please update soon 😊 You know how difficult it is for all QHians to spend this weekend? And your story is really helpping to spend my time 😊

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Geet_Ha
Please please please update soon 😊 You know how difficult it is for all QHians to spend this weekend? And your story is really helpping to spend my time 😊

Aww thanks :) I do have the next part ready. But I don't know if I should update so soon haha. I mean I just put the last chapter up 6 hours ago! Although my story is progressing slower than this last week in the show =P Lets see. If I can get a couple more replies in the next half hour, then i'll make sure I post the next chapter before I sleep tonight :)