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Originally posted by: srashti_kul

I read it all in one go...its amazing ...how could someone write so very well!!!!
thanks 4 the pm...becoz of it I got d chance to read this masterpiece...
continue soon...i m waitin

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

RES 😊

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Yayyy!!! Finally a happy Asad 😳

anywayy...

I was overwhelmed when I read that Zoya realized that Asad was repenting.. I had a huge grin on my face when she thought she should let him "off the hook" 😃 after that point I knew that happy times are back

ahh the way I would be jumping up and down in joy if i wake up and hear Asad singing.. 😳😳 Thank you Miss Monica for making it possible for me to reminisce the golden days of the AsYa teri meri scene.. forever one of my favorites 😳 OMG man I still can't stop imaging KSG singing and smiling and playing a guitar at the same time 🤢

Asad & Zoya having an intense talk forever gives me goosebumps.. especially the way you described that scene on the balcony swing.. the way I wish it would happen in the show.. Asad tracing circles on Zoya's wrist I can't explain how much you had me smiling.. I was so happy that Asad dropped his ego and apologized without stuttering and he called her by her first name at the same time!! 👍🏼 The dialogues you choose to write in the conversations between AsYa are just flawless in every single update of yours without a doubt 👏👏

To be honest I was also waiting for Asad to shout at Zoya when she spilled water on him then he later realizes what he did and goes to apologize but I was wrong 😆 I love your imagination.. 😉 Zoya must have been flabbergasted at his reaction.. she was ready to hear a whole speech from him but to her surprise as well nothing of that sort happened 😆 the things love does to people 😳 LOL at what Zoya said to him about the shirt 😆 I was yearning to get this Asad and Zoya back 😳 this update of yours made me smile ear to ear and then I carry on reading only to get onto imagining a shirtless Asad.. Hayyeee ☺️ I need to fan myself ☺️ you just made it get better and better .. his behavior totally different from what he is.. and on top of it all I can't believe he said "aap bhi dekhne layak cheez hai" OMG!! are you seriousss!! Gul Khan should read this and make Asad like this in the show 😳

totally loved it as usual 😃

Congratulations on completing a whole thread.. now you should open another thread because this has gone over 150 pages 😆

Originally posted by: Pori

I just finished reading all the chapters on wards from chapter 2!!

GREAAATTT!!

So Zoya finally forgave Asad, and Asad is willing to trust Zoya. Great! I wonder if it was Ayaan who heard Tanveer speak?? That would be amazing then he could bring it to Asad!!!

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: blasterrr

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">actually you might not be knowing😉..but i was a regular and silent reader of your story...but as I did not get any time afterwards...[sad but true] i stopped reading it.{sorry😭}...but now as I read 4-5 parts in one go I am commenting now... the story is awesome and oh its nice that zoya is quite open to mr. khan...thanxx for al the pms and plz do pm me whenever you update...and last but not least congratttzzz...for 2nd thread!!!!!!!!!!!!
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