AsYa FF ~ Mere Jazbaat ~ T#1 ~ Link to T#2 Page 1! - Page 107

Originally posted by: goingreen

Okay so I finally got down to reading this whole thread! You know the first few chapters looked a little familiar, so I'm sure I must've started reading this at one point, and then stopped again since I'm so scatter-brained and have no patience :p Anyway, highlights of this thread before I go to the next one:

"Aap mujhe girne dete, Mr. Khan. After all, aapko milne se pehle bhi mein bohot giri hoon. Phir bhi mein theek hoon. I'm not made of glass," she said curtly.

I don't know why but I loved this statement so so so much. How much has Asad done to put Zoya down, it's so true! Yet she stayed strong <3

He brought up their entwined hands to his heart, and let his right hand travel from her cheek to her neck. He slowly tilted his head, leaned in and gave her a soft peck on her wound. She shuddered under his touch and felt a tingle in her cheek, both from a dull pain and the feel of his lips on her skin.

AHH what a lovely way to describe their first kiss!! Asad, completely uninhibited, Zoya, all shy and confused. Beautiful (:

"Waise, ek baat kahoon," he whispered hoarsely into her ear. She nodded. "Aap bhi dekhne layak cheez hai."

Oooh looks like Mr Khan can be mischievous too huh :p The last part of this thread was my favourite!! Openly flirting and all, so adorably cute (:

Btw, hating Deepak and why has Tanveer been introduced oh nooo!! Okay bye I'm going on to the next thread now.

Originally posted by: Pasya

best ff...

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Monicaaa!! Surprised to FINALLY see me on this thread hain na? I am too 😆

AHHH YAYA!!!! FINALLY!!!! 😃😳

And let me tell you girl this FF is so brilliant that it's actually evil!! I had my exam this morning and I thought I'd bookmark this FF on my computer and I ended up reading 4 chapters without realizing and then Ammi was like, Tyaar ho, university nahi jana and then I had to run which was pretty horrible cos you had included a twist at the ending of the 4th one And then I had to revise a chapter included in exam in the bus which I hadn't gotten time to skim through cos I had spent that time on your FF 😃 So yes you, along with your cliffhanger AND this FF is PURE EVIL 😆 Ya hear me?? PURE EVIL!!! 😆 But still I LOVED it! I think it has to do with my attraction for all evil things LMAO 🤣

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YOU WERE LEAVING STUDYING TO READ MY FF?!?!?! 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Anyway, so coming to the FF, you already know how much I love your style of writing and how you're OBVIOUSLY one of the best writers on this forum so I'm not going to repeat it all again! You know how awesome you are with words 😳

You're seriously too sweet. You know how you said that you weren't that happy with your chapters, and then the comments of others made you beam? You just did that for me. I swear people love this FF so much, that I'm in awe. I never thought it would get this much feedback, that too positive, in such a short time. And that people would still wait for update after my two months sabbaticals 🤣Thanks hun! You're a sweetheart! 😳

And you called MY updates EPISODES??!! You're updates are like episodes!! The dialogues are so VERY REALISTIC I get awed!! Seriously tell me, are you one of the script writers of QH too? 😲 Your dialogues won my heart!! I could seriously imagine them pouring from all the characters mouth without even trying to think! Kudos to you!! 👏👍🏼

AHHH I can die in peace now! *pumps fist in the air* You think mine are EPISODES 😲??? And you LOVE my dialogues!?!?! 😲 *dies* LOL I'm not a script writer, but I kinda wish I was sometimes. The tracks lately. Smh.

The story is awesome as well! Asad badtameez nahi sudhray ga! Phir se Zoya k parents ko bech mein le aya But I'm glad Zoya didn't take it quietly. Ab they both can roam around with slap marks on their cheeks except Asad is luckier cos he got slapped by a human instead of a devil 🤣

EXACTLY! This is what I WANTED to happen in the show. I was crossing my fingers that they would make Zoya go to New York. I mean there's so much scope here. I haven't even explored it all. I might so another smaller TS to include the New York tour I wanted to, since I didn't get to put in as much of it as I wanted. 😳 (I know someone on this forum will be VERY happy about this 😆)It didn't fit with my story hehe. But anyhow, since it didn't happen in the show, I thought I'd take matters in my own hands 😆

The BEST part for me is that - as I've already mentioned quite a lot of times - I stopped watching the episode during the same time your FF starts so for me this is the story of the drama continuing 😃

AHHH I'm beaming!!! That's such a HUGE compliment! OMG! I never thought you'd love this FF this much 😳😃

Anyway, bohat bakwas kar li! I'll keep commenting as I read more 😉 I wish I could read it in one go but I still have my Islamic Studies midterm on monday and an assignment to hand in too but I'll catch up in max 2, 3 days 😳

AWW take your time babes! If I have more comments like these to look forward to, I can wait patiently (Just out of curiosity, how far DID you get? 😳)

And for the record, I'm ALREADY IN LOVE WITH THISSS!! 😃

🤗 Not as much as I love yours, I'm SO sure 😳

Love yaaa!! 🤗

LOVE YOU MORE!!!!

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Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ummm can I say something that I hope you wouldn't mind?? 😳

Not to be a Miss Know-It-All, but shouldn't the name of this FF be "Meray Jazbhaat"? Because Jazbhaat is a masculine word in Urdu 😆 You don't have to change it or anything!! I'm just saying it. Actually I live in Pakistan so obviously my Urdu is great so yes, I can't finding mistakes in everything 😆 I don't point them out but since this is the name of your FF and is something important is liay just letting you know 😉 You can ask others for confirmation 🤣

Originally posted by: mochhug