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Posted: 12 years ago
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what will happen next...waise it was nice..nahi very nice..thanxx for the pm
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Chapter 6 (Last)

Asad looked at her shocked as she pushed him away.

She then nears him again this time punching her fists on his chest, crying at the same time.

"I could have died of a heart attack just now."

Asad smiled with relief.

"I won't have let that happened Miss Farooqi."

"You are mentally challenged or something."

He takes her hands in his and nears her. Their heads collide gently, the tips of noses against each other. Both close their eyes.

"And now this mentally challenged man has fallen for a crazy girl."

Both smile. Zoya still crying.

Everything else faded into insignificance.

They stand in that position for an unlimited period of time.

They finally break away when they hear a little pup barking somewhere.

Asad looks down and finds a cute little puppy with a small basket in his mouth. He leaves it there and turns back, running away in the woods.

Asad bends down to pick it up.

The basket had a small velvet box with a note tagged with it.

"It's a crime, not to express, when in love."

Asad takes out the small velvet box, opens it and finds a beautiful diamond ring inside. He looks up at Zoya who was examining the ring through her eyes, frowning at the same time.

He smirks.

Takes out the ring and throws the box back.

"I guess its not for me."

Zoya laughs.

"But now that I've got the chance."

He kneels to the ground, forwards his right hand in front of Zoya...

"Dear Lady! Would like to have the privilege of becoming Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan?"

Zoya looks at him stunned. Every thing was so beyond belief.

"This has got to be a dream."

"Yes one of your fantasies, now please... my knees hurt."

"Yes...Yes...yes..." she yelled.

He smiles and tenderly sides the ring in her finger.

"OMG! This is so beyond belief."

Zoya says dazed.

Asad stands straight and picks her up in his arms and spins her round and round.

"Mr. Khan you are behaving like a teenager."

"That's because i feel like one at the moment."

He makes her stand straight.

"You don't know... i just cant explain what i feel like right now." He said happily.

"Neither can i..."

They stood there staring at each other ofr a while then Asad finally said, "Come lets go."

It starts drizzling. They walk hand in hand down the road.

Finally complete. Both found the place where they actually belong- in each other's heart- what could be a better home than that?

The car is still there, after all who would want to walk when you can stroll down with your love for an hour before you reach home.

Love is simply magical.

-----------------------THE END----------------------------------

This is not one of my bests but one of my favourites. I fell in love with it the minute i started writing it. So its very close to my heart, as Asya.

Writing a story is like a journey. When you end it you cant decide whether you are happy or sad. Your feeling is an amalgamation of both.

Anyways... Coming up Next

Asya OS Broken Strings

Keep waiting.

Okay enough of my chit chat .

Time for Your valuable comments.

Linkks to other work by me😛

~Living The Dream-Asya~ SaneWhispers Writing Index

Edited by SaneWhispers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for such a wonderful ss...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Both parts were aweesummm
abt nxt os plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...sweet ending...for me the puppy was the highlight...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You know what? you write sooo good! 👏 👏 👏

one of my favs you are! 🤗

now that it has ended here i will let Ankie Approve do the rest of the talking 😆 😳




Laoo you :-*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice SS dear. Sad it ended :( Please start writing a new one already 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye hoye wonderful...but zoya ne asad ko push kyu kiya???
waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jojo2802

oye hoye wonderful...but zoya ne asad ko push kyu kiya???
waiting...

gusse mein of course...did you read last part?
she was like pareshan who the girl was and he was keeping up the suspense for so long so she got scared and then when he finaally told hr that its no one but her...it was just a sudden reaction!

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