Asya SS Somewhere I Belong

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Somewhere I Belong

Haye! Asyan's again... after making you guys cry in Nocturne (OS)... i felt like doing it again this time in a new way. I know you are going to like it... in case you think you won't , please don't bother reading. Here you go with the first part.

Index

Chapter 1 Same Page

Chapter 2 page 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3532111/asya-ss-somewhere-i-belong?pn=2

Chapter 3 page 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3532111/asya-ss-somewhere-i-belong?pn=4

Chapter 4 page 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3532111/asya-ss-somewhere-i-belong?pn=6

Chapter 5 page 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3532111/asya-ss-somewhere-i-belong

Chapter 6 (Last)page 9


Chapter 1

A warm windy evening. A huge opening covered with a carpet of lush green grass, circled by huge pillars spanking under thin beard of raw ivy. Through the gaps between the pillars one could see the extending beauty of the town. The side facing the sea received cool evening breeze. It's almost twilight. A marble fountain in the centre with petite candles and white, yellow and hot pink flowers floating on the still calm water.

One piece of the grassy patch had a beautiful stage set on it, decorated with lush green leaves, fresh flowers, net curtains and fiery lights donned on each side. The rest of the place was full of tables set for the guests.

Two shining arrogant eyes, promising a fully dominating personality, stared at the few stars sparkling in the sky. He is a tall and handsome figure leaning on a column; the breeze against him blew his hair from his forehead. He was lost in some thoughts. His hands rested in his suit's pockets, his black three piece Armani.

He was continuously being distracted by the resonance produced by the tidal waves as the splashed tons of water on the concrete walls ten feet below him.

Someone calls from behind. Her sweet soprano voice pronounces his name,

"Mr. Khan."

An annoyed expression overtakes him as he rolls his eyes, not even bothering to turn around.

Dressed in a candy pink, full length, chiffon peshwas, decked with dainty silver embroidery, her profound bands of hair resting on her shoulders, adorned with delicate jewellery and a 7'' stiletto heel, she stands right next to him.

"Asalam-o-Alikum Mr. Khan." She said with a broad smile and sparkling almond eyes.

"Walikum Asalam Miss Farooqi." He replied without looking at her.

"you really love ignoring me. Hun?" she says steadily still smiling.

"No, i didn't hear you."

"okay okay stop pretending... i know you did... but never mind...i met your mother just now... my my poor lady still desirous of finding a perfect bari bahu... why do you reject every girl?... or wait a minute... i bet they reject you first... i mean look at you, so grave and serious. Whoo in her sane mind would want to wreck her life by marrying you... either ways its your mother who suffers at the end."

She said half talking to herself.

He just rolled his eyes ignoring her blabber.

"Are you done?"

"Of course not... look Mr. Khan i want to help you out... and more than that i want to help Dilshad aunty. You know i think i can find a perfect match for you... but for that i need to analyse you first... ummm ...okay chose one... Heer or Ranjha?"

He glared at her.

"Don't look at me like that, i am your well wisher, just choose one."

Still no answer.

"Come on Mr. Khan. Chooose."

He sighed. "Okay... Ranjha."

"Laila or Majnu?"

He gave her a weird look. "Laila."

"Allah!... Mr. Khan you are in serious trouble."

"i am sorry?" he asked rising an eyebrow.

"You want someone who really loves you... you want to be the beloved one." She answered intelligently.

"How can you say that?"

"oh come on... you see in Punjabi poetry... Heer is considered as the lover and Ranjha as the beloved one, similarly, Laila as the beloved and Majnu as the lover... and you selected Ranjha and Laila, so that my dear makes it all clear."

He looked at her narrowing his eyes.

"You know what Miss Farooqi?... you are very weird."

"Thanks for the compliment... it takes one to know one."

"Anyways, i don't believe any of your philosophies and please i am not interested in your poetry business at all."

"Mr Khan believe it or not love is a weird thing, like you and me, as you said. It engulfs us. When it has to come, it has to come. No brain works then. Its something you can't cure, in the end you have to endure it because no matter how much you run away, it's still there and will always be.

I believe there is a girl out there for you. Whose pain will be your pain, whose happiness will be your happiness, whose smiles will be your smiles and her sorrows will be your sorrows.

She will be like the oxygen in your air, the blood in your veins, the supplement you need to keep healthy. She will be in the wake of your dreams, the reason for your sleepless nights, the drug which won't allow any coffee to minimize it. You will be under a spell. I am telling you."

He stared into her deep eyes. She thought finally he did understand but his next words negated it all.

"Miss Farooqi... do you write fairy tales?... no i bet you live in one."

"O Allah!... Mr. Khan what's wrong with you?

Iss tarha tu koi larki aap se shadi nai kare gi."

"Tu aap kar len."

"mein tu kar lun par... what?"

She said with her lips shaped in a perfect o.

"Per?" he rised an eyebrow, smirking.

"Hopeless Mr. Khan... you are hopeless."

"Well Miss Farooqi... life is full of disappointments."

"You know Mr. Khan... some people think that nothing is impossible in this world... i think they should meet you... because you are impossible."

"Still... i am atleast worth considering... no?"

"Arggg!" she groaned and briskly walked towards the crowd.

Asad smiles to himself. 'why on earth did i ask her that?'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now this is called as a modern fairy tale.👏

Gal, i seriously in love with your writing! Write more and more pleaseee
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Now this is called as a modern fairy tale.👏


Gal, i seriously in love with your writing! Write more and more pleaseee

Thanks
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awesome start..
luvd de little nok jho's missng dat des days
m in..
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Hey ...
That was fantastic !!!

Edited by Gurmeet4Drashti - 12 years ago
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amazing start❤️..continue soon
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dis was perfect 👏

update soon
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Chapter 2

A cute boy with messy hair, who might have just popped out of his teens dashes towards a smiling asad.

"Bhai jaan Bhabh kia keh rai thin?"

"Kuch nai... wait a minute... why did you call her Bhabhi?" He scolds him pulling his ear.

"Ouch! Ouch! Bhai jaan sab ko pata hai ke aap kisi bhi larki se do minute se ziada baat nai karte aur inn se tu ghanta ghanta guftugu chalti hai app ki. "

"Tu?"

"Tu kia? Aap tu Mashallah se smile bhi karne lag gaye hain. Tu koi bhi yehi hi conclusion nikale ga."

"Shut up Ayaan."

"Mujhe tu shat up karwa len gay par iss dil ko kaise karwain gay?"

"Asad Ahmad Khan ke dil mein sena nai pathar hai... i mean senay mein dil nai pathar hai. And you know it k mein sirf dimagh ki suntan hun... no dil shill acha."

"ye bhi meray khayal mein unhi ki line hai... and by the way payar mein dimagh kaam karna choor deta hai bhai jaan."

"TUm sab ko school mein Physics, chemistry, maths ki jaga fantacies mein rahna sikhaya tha kia?"

"Ye sab tu inborn hota hai ab koi deny kare tu mein kia kar sakta hun?"

"Here is an advice... tum dimagh chatna band kar sakte ho."

Zoya with teary eyes was climbing down the stair case. She loses her balance and was almost about to trip when two strong hands support her and prevent her from falling. She quickly rubs the tears away before turning around to thank the person. She turns around and to her surprise finds Asad there.

He looks at her and asks,

"Are you crying Miss Farooqi?"

Zoya immediately turns away.

"No."

"Yes you are."

"I am getting late. I need to go." She starts walking.

"Wait... the parking lot is this way."

"So?"

"So your car is here why are you going the other way?"

"Its not my car Mr. Khan. Its my Uncles'."

"So?"

"So i am not allowed to use it."

"Why?"

"Huh why?... i live in a consoling proximity of millionaires but i am not one of them. You think these guys give me a damn... well then let me blow that bubble... they don't.

I was three when i lost my parents. I have lived all my life in an orphanage, these guys never wanted me and now that i am here somehow thay just want to get rid of me. I don't belong her. In fact i don't belong anywhere.

You know if i were you i would have chosen Heer instead of Ranjha and Majnu instead of laila because i have always craved for love in my life but i never got any. I didn't have love in my entire life so i started loving people. But i made one mistake, i expected love in return. But some people are just not lucky enough to be loved."

She looked away trying to control her tears, biting her lips, but was totally unsuccessful. Asad looked at her stunned. The girl who never forgot to smile and make others smile had so much pain in her own heart.

"I am sorry i bothered you. I need to catch a bus now."

She started walking again. Asad follows her and blocks her way.

"Can i drop you home?"

"Dont call that nest my home...and i am fine i will manage."

"But i am not fine."

Asad said abruptly and then realising what he had just said he tried to change the topic. While Zoya gazed into those brown eyes.

"Come on I'll drop you home we are neighbours after all."

He drags he to the passenger seat of his car and then himself paces towards the driver seat.

Thay were silent the rest of the way. Zya's words kept echoing in his mind again and again. He stopped the car outside her uncle's house.

"Thank you Mr. Khan." She muttered.

"Sorry?" he pretended as if he didn't hear her.

"I said thank you Mr. Khan." She repeated this time stressing on each and every word.

"My pleasure."

She was about to get off the car when Asad called back,

"Miss Farooqi."

She turns around,

"Yes."

"You look much better when you smile."

Zoya smiled broadly, he smiled back.

"Thankyou."

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Lol. Even I went "O" wen Asad asked Her to marry him. Lookim forward to the next part.
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dis was FREAKING AWESOME 👏

mr khan ko miss farooki ke aasun bilkul acche nhe lagte 😊
n mr khan is in loveee ❤️
heheehehe 😆

again it was SUPER 👍🏼
update jaldi jaldi
i want to how ll mr khan make her feel dat she belongs wid him n only him

thanxx fr pm
n update sooon
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