Asya SS Somewhere I Belong - Page 7

not fair.how long will i have to wait for the next part? one request please.can you keep it real and simple.i know everybody prefers filmy, cant live without you stuff but you do real so well. that is your usp and thats what i liked best abt your writig.

This was me the entire time I was reading: 😳 really good job!

Originally posted by: anoo67

not fair.how long will i have to wait for the next part? one request please.can you keep it real and simple.i know everybody prefers filmy, cant live without you stuff but you do real so well. that is your usp and thats what i liked best abt your writig.

Originally posted by: kukuzgeet

What's not fair?... i have updated all the parts

i try keeping it real and simple but you see how much a teenager can help being not filmy... still your suggestion is valued... i gave it a thought and next time when i write i will keep this in mind

and thanks for the appreciation

i dont mean to be rude or anything...in fact i waas waiting for such comments

i have written reality based stories in urdu but as this is the first time i have given a try to eng. therefore keeping real and simple is somehow mushkil... but i will try writing something very close to reality... but then there is one thing... we dont have many good endings in reality.😉

love kuku.

but she pushed him away, didnt she, so theres more to come or did i miss out on something?

all my fault.i did not see the second update on page 9.felt really satisfied after reading it like one feels after reading a good story. and loved it how you kept it realistic while still providing the aww moments.

hey
that was just beautifull
i loved it
thanks for writing this,it is truly awesome.

Originally posted by: crazzychips

hey
that was just beautifull
i loved it
thanks for writing this,it is truly awesome.

loved it !!! plz pm me when you put up the next os!! asad zoya ❤️

I din't knew that you had other stories too. Thank god you have an index. And, I am reading all of them now which I haven't read yet. They are all beautiful and this one is just amazing. One thing please in future whatever you write you need to pm me. okay.. I don't want to miss any single one of your stories.

Originally posted by: zoas91

loved it !!! plz pm me when you put up the next os!! asad zoya ❤️