~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Ankie ki bachhi! how could u do dis? you know we wud get crazy reading dis n hence u stopped here. not fair yaar. u do know u write exceptionally well, don't you? den y torture us? plz yaar aj hi update karna da remaining part, now you be merciful enough n end da suspense. ok?

well I must say da part was SUPERB. it was all I want Asad to be in QH n dat punch on the bitch's face was just perfect. I wish Asad ended her life dere itself, y leave such a burden on the earth. his helplessness n agony reminded me of da entire Mangalpur scene again n seriously I had my fists curled n eyes moist hearing his scream.

please yaar do cont, please, its a request.

love,

Nimra.

Originally posted by: shivangi1112

thnks fr d pm .

awesome update .. but just want zoya back ... soon ...

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

You are mean! Mean mane Meanie!🥱jk 🤗

😆

Well yeaa that's my own creation, kuch toh Ankie ka created hona chahiyeh baccha jan 😉

Originally posted by: sweetypie_16

Kya part tha Appieee...!!! :D

Maza aa gaya parh ke...it was Awesome :D Tannu and stammer?? Loved it :D The best scene was Asad slapping Tannu darling ;) :D

Continue soon :) Sorry for the chotu sa comment...abhi issi se kaam chalao :P live u appiieee <3 :)

Originally posted by: AnjaliSharma

Ankieee!!
It was awesomelyfantastical!! :D
The way uss bhooki Tanveer ko tune confess karaya!!
And ESP... Thappar was MINDBLOWING yaar! Love u for that!
Pleeej aaj update kar dena.!!

Originally posted by: Asya6

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to be hurtful!
I am angry though!
You didn't even answer my question! When are you updating??

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

No you are not hurtful who said that?!😲

i was comical le haluwaa :P depends on the response :P if good i will later in the dark night😎