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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: starsanjana

ok so those were my fav parts...i hope that tanveer is as helpless in QH as she is here...when asad finds out the truth!

I seriously had soo much of fun while i wrote that out! wasnt it lovely?! my fav parts too! 😳 🤣 ehhee

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: janestone6
This is such a an awesome update. Thank you for the quick update 👏
Look what have you done i really want this to happen in the serial like seriously wala serious.
Im dying to wait for the day when TANNU"S CHEEK WILL BE HURTING. Jab her JAMMY * says it in Zoya style* will slap her till death.
The stammering was muah.
Jaldi se update karo plej

Hii sweets, thank you! i hope it was really worth the time 😳

Uff how i wish for it to be true :P 😆 😳

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Ankieee u genius... I lurvv u.. N u probably knw dat 😆

the chapter was soo so so so fanfreakingtastic

i laaoo it 😃

tanveer is maddd 🤢 she needs a psy-chia-trist! She actually banged her head five times wid a rod

woah i wanna do dat to tanveer

n u r ryt we laaoo u cuz aak slapped tanveer 😃

And ofcourse u get Grumpy Approves 👏

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: meow23
'MAIN SIRF AUR SIRF ZOYA KA HOON! ZOYA SIRF MERI HAI MERI! GET THAT IN YOUR F*CKED UP BRAIN' Asad screamed into her ears.

You liked this part? :P 😆

Originally posted by: Nukti
Awsome part 👏👏
Another cliffy😡

🤣 Yeaah thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Geet_Ha
Nice 😊 Finally truth is out 😊

Thanks Geetha! you did a wonderful job in your SS. i loved that! 😳

Originally posted by: Curiousmind
Great part now give us the next part!

For that keep stalking 🤣

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Tumhe kisine Supari di hai kya hum logon ko tadpa tadpa ke marne ki?
Kabhi words ka pathar phekti ho, jo wahan lagta hai jahan na khud dekh sakte hain na kisi ko dikha sakte hain
(Heart yr, tumne kya socha tha
u dirty mind)
aur kabhi cliff hanger se ulta latka deti ho
(ouch, it hurts)
dis z nt fair yr
agar marna hai toh sidhe marona
'Dhichkyaun'
phir vamps ki tarha haske bolna,
Ha ha ha ha ha
'Ek goli se do sikar'
ek minute hum do toh hai nahi usse v kai guna jyada hain
So let me count
1 2 3 4 5...
main count karti hun tum tab tak aur ek ki tayari karo
agle comment main post karungi thik hai
AUR HAN USSE JHAKAS THAPAD KE LIYE EK JHAKAS KISS
MUUUHHHAAA
*blushing*
U know m drooling over u always
bt u r badluck aaj woh kushnasib tum nahi balki tumhari story hai...
Lage raho
Aur han PM ke liye
SHUKRIYA ;)

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You can call me Afu ;)

@Asya6

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Ankie di! Wasn't this supposed to be a two shot? You left us again with cliffy!
I command you to update today itself!
I loved it though!

P.S: What's kamabakat?

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
Ankieee u genius... I lurvv u.. N u probably knw dat 😆

the chapter was soo so so so fanfreakingtastic

i laaoo it 😃

tanveer is maddd 🤢 she needs a psy-chia-trist! She actually banged her head five times wid a rod

woah i wanna do dat to tanveer

n u r ryt we laaoo u cuz aak slapped tanveer 😃

And ofcourse u get Grumpy Approves 👏

Apne comment kiya??

Well yeaa, that is why Zoya was bleeding :P

and yea she left no stone unturned for killing Zoya 🤣

And that is why Zoya is in such a had shape 🤣

Reallyy??! seriously?! Thank you :-X i laoo grumppieee 😳 ❤️ 🤣

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: kukuzgeet
aaahhhwesome... continue continue and please tanu be sentenced to death in the last part.

Ahhaha! I will consider it for sure 😳

Originally posted by: awesome
freaking awesome

Thank you soo much deary 🤗

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
awsomeee

Kriti deary, kitna maza aaya likh karr! dil ko chain pohuchi 🤣

Originally posted by: LoveAsYa222
Sorry for the late reply Ankie :( I just read both of ur parts at once and I loved it😳...especially the part Asad slapped Tanveer 🤣 Asad screaming Zoya's name was just

Jitna maza aapko aaya utna maza humka bhi aya mere dost 🤣 Thanks once again 😳

Originally posted by: Nisbahx
Ankie agar ye update itna acha nehi hota toh aaj mein tumko bhi zinda gadd deti iss cliffhanger ke liye par kya karo agar tumhe zinda gadd diya toh update kaun karega!! 🤣
Lol jokes aside its awesome Ankie!! Cant wait for the next update and I laaoo you for making Asad slap Tanveer!! 🤗

mujhe pata hai aaj extreme reactions milene wale hai! i really want that 🤣

thank you soo much! hope it was fun like your comments 😳

Originally posted by: Pasya
omg... Its so nyc as lyk u... Lve u that slap... & for next prt which u wil post today...!!

Am i nice? Like really? I doubt 😆 thank you! i will see with the generous response i get 🤣

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Asya6
Ankie di! Wasn't this supposed to be a two shot? You left us again with cliffy!
I command you to update today itself!
I loved it though!

P.S: What's kamabakat?

TS it is 🤣 T for Three 🤣

am hella tired. And upar se i loved the way in between 🤣

Ehahhaa!

Thanks lovely.

Well that means,unfortunate, wretched, a wretch, scoundrel and so on :P

Kambakkat Ishq for instance :P

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niharika

@nihamrm

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Ankiee!!!! why would you decide to stop there
well forget about that
iss part ke baare mein baat karthi hoon
i would just say you nailed it man
its just amazing
and asad ne tannu ko tapad maara yay *me jumping on the bed and doing zoya wala happy dance* she deserves it
and kya brain chalaya asad( tum ne cause u wrote it) tannu ke kilaf evidence ke liye
and what else can i say i dont wont to state the obvious by saying that your an amazing writer with a mind blowing writing style but i cant say anything else

ab toh bas tumhare pm ka intazar hoga

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