~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 17

awesome update...loved it so much waiting eagerly for the next update

ankie i simply loved it!!!do continue😛and i love u for that for letting that b***** into jail!!i hope this happens!!and tanveer with his own mouth say all this to asad and he slaps her

This was just AWESOME!!!!!!!! I loved this update ankie di!!!! My most favourite line was :
"he pointed at Tanveer if she were a terrible contagious virus" This, she is. Definitely.

tht was awesome!please continue!but instead of slapping tanveer he shld have tried to squeeze her throat and suffocate her tht would be much better for what she did!😡

Wow that slap was well awaited fr Tanveer

Ankie before I die out of tension u better update the last part.
This part was awesome.
Tanveer-I hate her sooo much.
I love u so much for the slap.
Asad's rage was shown very well.
The way u had written about Asad's helplessness after such a betrayal was wonderful.
I feel really bad for ur jeeju.
I can't see him cry u know.😳Zoe ko theek kar doo.
Again a cliffy.I hate u.😆I want Zoe to be perfectly fine.
I also want a good hot shot romance after Zoe is discharged from the hospital😆
I know I'm besharam but I'm craving to read some good romance b/w ASYA right now and I wish u may fulfill this wish of mine.😳
You are a wonderful writer sweetheart.
Plz try to update ASAP.

Oh na na 😛
Billo Rani got a tight slap from Asad! Ow! 😃

ankie i loved it !!!continue!!asad wow!😉😆its very interesting!!