~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 14

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

Tumhe kisine Supari di hai kya hum logon ko tadpa tadpa ke marne ki?
Kabhi words ka pathar phekti ho, jo wahan lagta hai jahan na khud dekh sakte hain na kisi ko dikha sakte hain
(Heart yr, tumne kya socha tha
u dirty mind)
aur kabhi cliff hanger se ulta latka deti ho
(ouch, it hurts)
dis z nt fair yr
agar marna hai toh sidhe marona
'Dhichkyaun'
phir vamps ki tarha haske bolna,
Ha ha ha ha ha
'Ek goli se do sikar'
ek minute hum do toh hai nahi usse v kai guna jyada hain
So let me count
1 2 3 4 5...
main count karti hun tum tab tak aur ek ki tayari karo
agle comment main post karungi thik hai
AUR HAN USSE JHAKAS THAPAD KE LIYE EK JHAKAS KISS
MUUUHHHAAA
*blushing*
U know m drooling over u always
bt u r badluck aaj woh kushnasib tum nahi balki tumhari story hai...
Lage raho
Aur han PM ke liye
SHUKRIYA ;)

Originally posted by: nihamrm

Ankiee!!!! why would you decide to stop there
well forget about that
iss part ke baare mein baat karthi hoon
i would just say you nailed it man
its just amazing
and asad ne tannu ko tapad maara yay *me jumping on the bed and doing zoya wala happy dance* she deserves it
and kya brain chalaya asad( tum ne cause u wrote it) tannu ke kilaf evidence ke liye
and what else can i say i dont wont to state the obvious by saying that your an amazing writer with a mind blowing writing style but i cant say anything else

ab toh bas tumhare pm ka intazar hoga

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

TS it is 🤣 T for Three 🤣

am hella tired. And upar se i loved the way in between 🤣

Ehahhaa!

Thanks lovely.

Well that means,unfortunate, wretched, a wretch, scoundrel and so on :P

Kambakkat Ishq for instance :P

Originally posted by: Shell16

That was great.

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

'H-h-hamne-ha-hamne-k-k-kuch-chh-na-hhii kiyaa-aa Jaammyy! Haa-haa-maa-raa yakeen-nn maa-nee-yee! Hum-m-m hu-um-umm kyun-nnn Zo-ooyaa ko mar-rr-naa-chahengey?!' Tanveer stammered.

Stuttering much, Tannu darling? 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Read till here, going to read Quran! 😳 Aake I'll comment acche se! 😃

So reserved! Obviously woman! 😡 😆

Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

ankie.tum na gr8 ho.i love u soo much for making asad slap tanveer.ab jaldhi se update karo.i cant wait any more.

Originally posted by: Asya6

Thanks. But are you updating today? Aren't two pages of comments enough to motivate you?
I forgot to mention this in my earlier comment that I love you for making Asad slap that evil Tannu!

P.S: I've never heard of a three shot! It's your own creation!