~ Tabeez ~ (Three Shot Completed) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

waah ankie kya story likhi hai...maza aa gaya padhke...

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Posted: 12 years ago
'H-h-hamne-ha-hamne-k-k-kuch-chh-na-hhii kiyaa-aa Jaammyy! Haa-haa-maa-raa yakeen-nn maa-nee-yee! Hum-m-m hu-um-umm kyun-nnn Zo-ooyaa ko mar-rr-naa-chahengey?!' Tanveer stammered.

Stuttering much, Tannu darling? 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Read till here, going to read Quran! 😳 Aake I'll comment acche se! 😃
So reserved! Obviously woman! 😡 😆

*Yaaadited!* 😆

Dude dude dude. You are so good man! Why you no write and post everyday? 😡 And I really wanted the Mangalpur incident to be repeated and also BCA's aukat utaaroing show! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
You are fantastic babe. The way you write the dialogues and the emotions simultaneously is commendable! Love you for writing this. Next part will be aakhri? 😭 You kutti aurat 😡 Aur likh! 😆
Edited by -Fizzi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaahhhwesome... continue continue and please tanu be sentenced to death in the last part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
Tanveer ka sach bahar aagaya



and that slap 🤗 for that and Asad is guilty!!!!!!!!!
yeaa yeaa wanted that par aww his hand is bleeding and last part AAAHHH Kya kardiyyyaaa!!!!

Koi nahi continue sooonnn 😃

Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty



'YEA TOH MAIN BHI POOCH RAHA HOON KI TUM KYUN USS BICHARARIEE KO MARNA CHAHOGI??! USSNE TOH APNE SAPNE MEIN BHI TUMHE! TUMHE TOH CHORO HI, KISI KA BHI BURA SOCHNE KA BHI SOCHA TAK NAHI HOGA!! KYUN KIYA TUMNE AISA TANVEER??! KYUN??! JABKI TUMHE PATA THA KI MAIN USSE BAKHUDA PYAAR KARTA HOON! WOH MERI ZINDAGI HAI MERA SABKUCH HAI! KYUN KYA AISA??? ZOYA KE SAATH?? KYUNN?? I BLOODY WANT AN ANSWER!!' Asad screamed as he took Tanveer by her arms and shook her violently.
Dilshad was shocked to hear those words from her son. She didn't know what do, either to clam her manic son down, or to rejoice that her son was finally in love. Ayaan protectively hugged her and pleaded for her to be clam.

Tanveer screamed. The very next thing she knew was her left cheek burning up in pain as she fell against the window beside the wall. It registered everyone, Asad had slapped her.
'TUMNE AISA KAISE SOOCH BHI LIYA???!' Asad went near Tanveer taking her into his suffocating grip.
'MAIN SIRF AUR SIRF ZOYA KA HOON! ZOYA SIRF MERI HAI MERI! GET THAT IN YOUR F*CKED UP BRAIN' Asad screamed into her ears.
He literary strangled Tanveer up in his grip but the Inspector released them.





ok so those were my fav parts...i hope that tanveer is as helpless in QH as she is here...when asad finds out the truth!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is such a an awesome update. Thank you for the quick update 👏
Look what have you done i really want this to happen in the serial like seriously wala serious.
Im dying to wait for the day when TANNU"S CHEEK WILL BE HURTING. Jab her JAMMY * says it in Zoya style* will slap her till death.
The stammering was muah.
Jaldi se update karo plej
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late reply Ankie :( I just read both of ur parts at once and I loved it 😳...especially the part Asad slapped Tanveer 🤣 Asad screaming Zoya's name was just
Edited by LoveAsYa222 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg... Its so nyc as lyk u... Lve u that slap... & for next prt which u wil post today...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ankie agar ye update itna acha nehi hota toh aaj mein tumko bhi zinda gadd deti iss cliffhanger ke liye par kya karo agar tumhe zinda gadd diya toh update kaun karega!! 🤣
Lol jokes aside its awesome Ankie!! Cant wait for the next update and I laaoo you for making Asad slap Tanveer!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

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