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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Another cliffy 😡

I hate u for that 😆

I loved this part 😳

Tanveer n asad scene was the best

I hope show mien bhi aisa hi kuch ho

Now update ASAP

Jaldi se

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Ankie ki bachhi! how could u do dis? you know we wud get crazy reading dis n hence u stopped here. not fair yaar. u do know u write exceptionally well, don't you? den y torture us? plz yaar aj hi update karna da remaining part, now you be merciful enough n end da suspense. ok?

well I must say da part was SUPERB. it was all I want Asad to be in QH n dat punch on the bitch's face was just perfect. I wish Asad ended her life dere itself, y leave such a burden on the earth. his helplessness n agony reminded me of da entire Mangalpur scene again n seriously I had my fists curled n eyes moist hearing his scream.

please yaar do cont, please, its a request.

love,

Nimra.

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Bhumika

@Nukti

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Awsome part 👏👏

Another cliffy😡

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Geetha

@Geet_Ha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Nice 😊 Finally truth is out 😊

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Great part now give us the next part!

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Manpreet23
Res

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Unres.

Okay, first of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING 😊

Second, it was an awesome update, again. 👏

And third, I'm gonna kill you for another cliffy. 🤢 🤣

Thank you thank you! Hope you enjoyed it :D

Well am enjoying that aweesome moment after ending it with a clify! 🤣

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: BlessedSoul
That was quick update Ankie... Loved it... Running out of words so bear

Aliena Dii! thank you! well if i didnt update it today, they would have seriously killed me :P soo yeaa! i guess i needa update the rest today itself again 🤣 hope it was worth your time 😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: nishithasharma
waah ankie kya story likhi hai...maza aa gaya padhke...

Seriously? well i had loads of fun typing it out. hope you guys had fun too 😳

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

'MAIN SIRF AUR SIRF ZOYA KA HOON! ZOYA SIRF MERI HAI MERI! GET THAT IN YOUR F*CKED UP BRAIN' Asad screamed into her ears.

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: cyndu_
Awesome part
Tanveer ka sach bahar aagaya

and that slap 🤗 for that and Asad is guilty!!!!!!!!!
yeaa yeaa wanted that par aww his hand is bleeding and last part AAAHHH Kya kardiyyyaaa!!!!

Koi nahi continue sooonnn 😃

Thank you thank you! i thought mujhe aj joote milengey but haila sab koi happy shappy 😆

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