my first OS:IS THIS...LOVE updated prt 7 pg8 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
hi sorry couldn't update yesterday , n i will try to finish it soon

IT WAS MORNING 8:30 ,
"Zoya ... dheere se ... aur unka ghar paas hi toh hain "
"par aapi ... mujhe jaldi jaana hain "
"tum bhi naaa zoya ... acha theek hai mein anwar se keh doongi woh tumhe chod denge "
"nahiiin"
"wofooo , zoya kya hua ... tum is tarah cheeeki kyun"
"w..o..h woh aapi mein khud chali javungi ... bekar mein jeeju ko kyun pareshan kare "
"theek hain jaisi teri marzi "
"ok aapi bye dopehar tak wapas ajavungi bye"

IN KHAN MANSION
"Par , zoya tum waha kya kar rahi ho"... TANVEER IS PRETENDING , AS IF SHE IS TALKING TO ZOYA , WHICH IS OVERHEARED BY ASAD
"Tannu kya hua , kya tum zoya se baat kar rahe the , use kuch hua toh nahi na "
"nahin jammy woh theek hai par pareshaan hone wali baat yeh hai ki ... woh gudiya factory mein hain"
"gudiya factory mein ... par kyun"
"pata nahi par woh keh rahi thi ki use kuch sabooth mila hain ... jo woh aap ko dhikana chahthi hai , aur aapka phone nahin lag rahi thi isileye us ne mujhe call kiya "
"par mera phone tho theek hain ... phir ..."
"JAMMY ... yeh sochne ki time nahi hai hame abhi waha jaana hoga "
"haan mein jaake gadi nikaltha hoon "

AND ASAD LEAVES , JUST THEN TANVEER GETS A CALL "razia bi calling "
"Haan bolo razia bi ... "
"WOH LOG USS LADKI KO UTHA CHUKE HAIN WOH YAHA AA RAHE HAIN , USS LADKI KO LEKAR , kya asad aa raha hain "
"haan hum aa rahe hain "
"theek hain mein rakhthi hoon"

FEW MINUTES BEFORE NEAR ZOYA'S HOME
As zoya comes out , some people surround her and put a black cloth on her and put her in a van and take away "

IN THE GUDIYA FACTORY
"Rashid miyaan , aaj hum aapke aur aapke bade bete ke beech ki sari dooriyaan khatam kar denge ... hum asad miyan ko sab kuch sach sach kehdenge "
"Razia bi , aap sach mein use sab kuch sach kehdengi"
"aur nahin toh kya ..." ... RAZIA WAS CUT DOWN BY A DISTURBING SHOUT
"Allah miyaan , whats wrong with u ... chodo mujhe , kaha le jaa raho chodo "
"AHA DHEKO ... TOH RASHID MIYAAN HAMARA PEHLA MEHMAAN AA GAYI "

THEN RAZIA TAKES OUT THE CLOTH ON ZOYA , ZOYA RUBS HER EYES AND TRIES TO SEE , SHE SEES HER DOST AND GOES FORWARD AND HUGS HIM
"Razia bi , yeh sab kya hain ... yeh bachi yaha kya kar rahi hain ... "
"sab batathi hoon ... arey dheko batoon batoon mein doosare mehmaan bhi aa gaye ... ayiye asad miyaan ayiye " shows asad and tanveer
"Aao TANVEER BILLO RANI , tum ne toh woh kar dikhaya jo tumhe bola gaya tha , yeh lo tumhare paise ..."
"Tannu yeh sab kya hain , yeh tum he paise kyun de rahi hain "
"woh ... jammy iam really sorry "
"chu chu chu , waah kya dosti hain "

SUDDENLY SOME PEOPLE COME AND HOLD ASAD, ZOYA AND RASHID AND TIE THEM TO SOME HARD CHAIRS
"YEH SAB ho kya raha hain razia ..." a angry and surprised rashid said
"hum sab samjha denge ..." again she was cut down by a disturbing voice
"chodo mujhe jaane do , chodo ..." zoya cries

A IRRITATED RAZIA GOES TO ZOYA AND "JAB HUM BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN TOH BEECH MEIN MAT BOLO" AND GIVES A TIGHT SLAP , IN THE PROCESS , THE MUSICAL CRYSTAL FALLS FROM HER BAG

"ZOYAAA... MEIN AAP KO PEHLE SE HOSHIYAAR KAR DOON , AGAR ZOYA KO KUCH HUA THO MEIN JAAN SE MAARDOONGA , SAB KO" A VERY ANGRY ASAD SPOKE
"ZOYAAA , RAZIA BI , HUM HATH JODTHE HAIN IN LOGON KO KUCH MAT KIJIYE PLZZZ" TANVEER CRIES

THEN ENTERS MR.GAFOOR SIDIQUE [zoya's dad]
"Razia , hame driver ne bataya ki tum yaha ho , yaha kya k...ar rahi ho " he sees around and is shocked ...

i know its bad , but ... actually i have a bad news ... tomorrow my collage starts again ... soo i cant update regularly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Shock Laga
Shock Laga
Shock Laga
Kya Khub Laga
over all *SHOCKING* Specially Tanveer's reac!
Anyways Best Of Luck 4 ewr new day in Collage!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
very interesting and beautiful story 😛
plzz contniue soon⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

LUVVVLLYYY!! FAB DEA !! it ws reallly nic !! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

nd D SUSPENCE u hv left is lik OMG!! cant wait plzZZ update it sooon!!
n yaTNKIIEEE CHOOO MCH 4 PMng ME!! tnxxx alooottt!!!🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
I can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I loved it, plz do pm me the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
wow such a nice and different os
plz.. update soon next

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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Very nice.. but you did it bit in a rush... until part 3..
part 4... nice touch Rabert and Zeenat pregnant... nice touch
Part 5.. Asya closeness..
Part 6... very interesting...
Part 7.. twist...

Plz update
Plz update
Plz update
Plz update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
aww tis is really great...
read it all in one go...
it really awesome...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update...
please pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
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