my first OS:IS THIS...LOVE updated prt 7 pg8 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice...diff from d story..goin on...pl continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hi thanx for great replies , but want more

EVERYONE IS IMMENSLY HAPPY FOR ANWAR AND ZEENAT , DILSHAD GOES TO ZEENAT
"Zeenat , bahut achi khabar sunai hai beta , bahut bahut badai ho ,par beta agar aap log hamare yaha ruk jaate tho , acha hotha mein thumko iss halat kya karna chahiye sab batathi "
"KHALA , mein bhi rehna chahthi thi par anwar ne achanak hi sab decide kar liya "
"mein samaj sakthi hoon beta , koi baat nahin jab bhi zaroorat ho toh mujhe phone kar lena mein aajavungi"
"theek hain khala thank u sooo much " BOTH OF THEM HUG

"arey jiju , itna badi baat hain , celebration toh banta hain , music on kijiye na "
"haan princess , here u go ..." AND TUM HI HO BANDHU SONG WAS GOING ON

EVERYONE WAS DANCING , AYAAN WITH HUMEIRA , ZOYA AND HER JIJU AND NAJMA , AS USUALL ASAD IS SITTING WITH HIS AMMI , AND ZEENAT ALSO
"Zeenat , chalo na plzzz"
"nahi anwar"

BOL NA HALKE , HALKE , BOL NA HALKE ... sudenly started
asad was drinking water... he just spit it out and threw a look towards zoya who was also looking at asad .both were like "aapko kuch yaad hai"

"asad beta , tum theek ho kya hua "
"kuch nahin ammi mein theek hoon "

ZEENAT AND ANWAR ALSO DANCE , AYAAN AND HUMEIRA R LOST , ZOYA IS LOST IN HER THOUGHTS

"Bhaijaaan , kaha khogay aap cheliye na plzz, aur tanveer tum bhi chalo na"

NAJMA GRABS BOTH OF THEM TO THE DANCE FLOOR , ASAD AND NAJMA START DANCING , TANVEER BRINGS ZOYA AND BOTH START DANCING
SUDDENLY ZOYA AND ASAD ARE IN FRONT OF EACH OTHER , both had a eye lock ... full on mitwaaa moment
ZOYA BREAKS THE mitwa moment and goes furiosly and switches of the music ...

"jiju bas , chalo khana khathe hai "
"par princess , abhi toh enjoy kar rahe the , kyun rok dhi music..."
"Anwar rehne doh , zoya theek keh rahi main abhi khana leke aathi hoon "
"haan chalo mein tumhari madath kar detha hoon , aur princess in logon ko bithao aur kuch juice wuce dedho"
"haan jiju, aap sab baitiye mein abhi aayi"

ASAD GOES TO KITCHEN WHERE ZEENAT WAS SETTING EVERYTHING AND ANWAR WAS HELPING HER

"Sir , maam mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi aap se "
"Arey , asad tum andar aao , aur yeh kya sir , mam , Mein tumhare bhai jaisa hoon BHAI bhoolasakte hon mujhe "
"aur mujhe bhabi"
"oh ... thats so sweet of u , par e baat karne ke baad , aap mujhe tapad mar de ... par mujhe manzoor hain"
"asad is everything fine , now u r scaring me tell me what u want to say"
"Awar bhai... actually mein ne jaane anjane zoya ko bahot dukh pahonchaya hain ...iskeliye iam really sorry "

BOTH ANWAR AND ZEENAT LOOK SEROUSLY AT ASAD , ASAD IS TENSED , BOTH OF THEM BURST OUT LAUGHING
"Asad , asad ... dont worry , lagtha hain tumne zoya ko sahi se pehchana nahin , usein apne aap ko sambhalna achi tarah se ata hain tum fikar mat karo woh toh kab ka bhool chuki hogi, dont worry "
"par iss baar nahi"

ANWAR ANS ZEENAT WERE SHOCKED , ANWAR DINT WANTED TO WORRY ZEENAT SO HE TOOK ASAD TO TERRACE
"Asad saaf saaf batao ki hua kya "

HE EXPLAINS EVERYTHING TO ANWAR , FROM DAY ONE HOW HE JUDJED ZOYA , HURT HER

"Asad ... tum ne sach mein bohot hurt kiya hain zoya ko ... par woh tumhe maaf zaroor karegi ek baar DIL se koshish karke dheko... actually zoya kisi ki dukh nahi dekha jaata isiliye usne aisa kuch kardiya hoga ... jo tum he sahi na lagi ho ... isiliye tum ne us par gussa hoke but thats fine ..."
"JIJUUU ... yaha ho aap mein ne aap ko kaha kaha nahi doonda neeche chaliye khana lag gaya hai"
"princess idhar aao , princess asad se baat karo aur cheeze sort karlo mein jaa raha hoon "
"par jiju"
"par war kuch nahi and make it fast i will be waiting down"

ASAD AND ZOYA WERE IN FRONT OF EACH OTHER
"U know what mr.khan mujhe kuch nahin suna ... mujhe kuch sort out nahi karni ... u know y cause AAP KE DIL MEIN SEENA NAHI PATAAR HAIN"

AND ZOYA STARTS TO LEAVE BUT SHE COULD'NT , SHE FELT A DRAG AND HIT A STRONG BODY , WHICH SHE WAS FAMILIAR TO
"Yeh kya batameezi hai MR.KHAN... chodiye mujhe jaana hai"
ASAD GETS CLOSER "Bathameezi pe tho mein abhi uthra nahi hoon ms.farroqui , mujhe jho kehna hai , woh hone ke baad aap chelijayiye main bhi nahin rokunga "
"nahin suni hay ... chodiye ... aur aapko kyun farak padne laga hai"
"ZOYA IAM REALLY SORRY FOR EVERYTHING , AB jayiye "

AND ASAD LEAVES , LEAVING A "DID HE REALLY SAY " WALA ZOYA BEHIND

I REALLY TRIED HARD TO WRITE THIS PART , I NEED MORE REPLIES😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Mmm nyc 1. Bt i dono want to mk ew weird bt ew PM me the whole chapter!!??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
woah i wonder how did i miss this os
loved all the parts
plz do con soon and plzzz pme me if u can plzz
i am gonna stalk it nyway lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Just read this ff...
Lovely...
Every part is awesome...
Plz plzzz plzzz cont soon...
And can u plz send me pm when u updt?
Thnx.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Loved it...Asad shud say MORE SORRIES...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Fab updte...eager 2 read the nxt part...updte asap...ty 4 the pm...pm me the nxt part also :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
HOLA FOLKS , THANK U ALL FOR SUCH GREAT REPLIES , AND LOTS OF LOVE N HAAAPY HOLI

EVERYONE HAD THEIR DINNER , AND AYAAN AND HUMEIRA START TO LEAVE
"Rabart , chalo mein tum logon ko chod ke aati hoon , aapi mein abhi aayi"
"AYAAN , RUKO mein bhi aa raha hoon"... a brothery voice called , which made ayaan really very happy
"haan bhaijaan , humeira chalo"
"ayaan aap ne tho yeh dena bhool hi gaya"...humeira spoke showing a gift
"MONA , yeh aap ke liye khaas humeira ne liya hain"
HUMEIRA COMES NEAR ZOYA AND SAID " decide nahi kar paa rahi thi laal ya safed isiliye dono le aayi "
ZOYA , OPENS THE GIFT AND SEES TWO BEAUTIFUL KURTAS , ONE RED AND ONE WHITE ... She hugs humeira and says thank u , then humeira says
"safed sachai keliye , aap ki dil ki tarah , aur laal pyaar ka rang hain , isse toh aap humse behtar jaanthi hain "

ZOYA LOOKS AT ASAD AND ASAD TOWARDS ZOYA AND FULL ON MITWAAA ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI ... AYAAN BREAKS IT
"BHAIJAAN , chale"
"ha..aan haan chalo"

WHILE THEY WERE REACHING , AYAANS SO CALLED BIKE , AYAAN SUDDENLY SAID
"Bhaijaan , now dont deny "
"WHAT"
"U have some feelings towards mona right???????????"
"Ayaan , tu janna kya chahtha hain ... and i dont have any feelings towards MS.FAARUQUI"
"R U SURE BHAIJAAN ... sab ko jhoot kehlo , shayad yakeen bhi karle , par mein nahin , chalo agar mein ne bhi yakeen kar liya PAR APNE DIL KO KITNA JHOOT BOLENGE , KAISE SAMJHAYENGE APNE DIL KO "

ASAD GLANCES AT ZOYA , WHO WAS GOING WITH HUMEIRA , LAUGHING ON THEIR OWN JOKES

"Ayaan bas karo aur jao , ghar mein sab intazar kar rahein honge "
"as u say bhaijaan"

"BYE , Mona bye bhaijaan "
"bye zoya , bye asad "

AND BOTH AYAAN AND HUMEIRA LEAVE
"MR.KHAN Mujhe aap se baat karni hain ... woh woh ...actually ...kya hain na mr.khan"

SHE WAS SHOCKED THERE WAS NO MR.KHAN THERE
"Yeh MR.KHAN kaha chalegaye , inhe achanak ho kya jata hain...sachi phoopi ko ek baar mr.khan ko mental hospital le jana chahiye , i bet mr.khan seriously need some therapy"

SUDDENLY SHE HITS SOMEONE
"OUCH ,jiju dheere nahi chal sakte the "
"SORRY , SORRY PRINCESS , tum jaldi andar jao aur zeenat ki madad karo plzzz princess , mein in logon ko chod ke ata hoon "
"AAP , jaa rahe ho phoopi " zoya becomes senti
"haan beta jana toh padega , kal milenge phir se ..."
"ok phoopi , par pacca kal milengi na "
"ha ha pacca " both of them hug and zoya says bye to everyone except asad
zoya goes to tanveer and hugs her and says "tanveer sab ki khayal rakhna , tum tho perfect ho na isiliye mein ne yeh kaha "
"haan zoya hum sab ka khayal rakhenge "
"tum kitni achi ho tanveer " and she hugs her again , this time tanveer hugs her back with lots of love thinking ..."yeh ho kya raha hain hame ... baar baar "tum achi ho" bolke yeh ladki hame acha bana ke hi chodegi ... vakai kuch toh baat hain zoya mein "

EVERYONE LEAVES AND ZOYA IS HELPING ZEENAT SUDDENLY DOOR BELL RING AND ZOYA GOES TO OPEN
"Aap , aap phir se yaha kya kar rahe hain MR.KHAN , i know ache se , phir ek baar sorry bolne aye hain na , par mein aap ko maaf nahi karoongi u got it , i will never forgive u "
"hogaya ms.farooqui , ab meherbani karke mera phone mujhe denge ... waha table par hain"

ZOYA IS REALLY ANGRY NOW GETS THE PHONE AND THROWS AT ASAD FURIOSLY, BUT HE CATCHES THAT
"Seriously, aap ko koi farak nahin padtha hain na mr.khan"
"thank u for the mobile ms.farooqui , bye see u tommorow "

IN ASADS ROOM
mujhe farak padtha hain zoya , aur mein aap ko kal batadoonga ki mujhe kyun farak padtha hain
and lifts his phone and is typing something

IN ZOYAS ROOM
Allah miyan , yeh mr.khan kis mitti ke bane hai , aur woh kya tha "see u tommorow" mr.khan mujhe kal milna chahthe hai par kyun .SHE GETS A MSG "kal wahi farm house par , hiway no.13 wala farm house par , subah 10 baja i will be waiting , asad " yeh mr.khan ko sach mein kuch hogaya hain , i mean mujhse milna chahte hain , aur us farm house par ...

IN TANVEERS ROOM
"mein kal asad ahmed khan ko lavungi , us gudiya factory mein "
"theek hain , ab us ladki ko phone karo aur theek 9 baje bahar ane ko bolo" ... a danjerous voice spoke from the other side
"theek hain"

"Hello , ZOYA ... hum tanveer bol rahe hain ... woh kya aap kal 9 baje yaha aa sakthi hain , hame aapko kuch dena hain "
"haan tanveer sure , i will be there , bye "
"theek hain , bye"

YA ALLAH , HAME AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAIN HUM ZOYA KE SAATH BOHOT GALAT KAR RAHE HAIN , AUR YEH RAZIA BI NE HAME KUCH NAHIN BATAYA HAIN WOH JAMMY AUR ZOYA KE SAATH US GUDIYA FACTORY MEIN KYA KARNE WALI HAIN ...

i hope this one is good enough , get ready for another sparks twist 😉
Edited by sparky03 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Very nice..eagerly waiting to read the next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great story. Loved every update so far:)

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