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Posted: 12 years ago
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dude...dis is actualy amazing 1...u HAVE TO CONTINUE dis OS..!! Updte asap...n i definitely want u 2 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI THANK U ALL FOR SUCH SWEET REPLIES GUYS

THE EPISODE STARTS WITH THE PEANUT EPISODE
"Aap ko patha tha ki mujhe peanut se alergy hai phir bhi aap ne yah dish banaya tha ki mein court na ja saku ... kyun kar rahi hai ye sab aap mein aap se kaha tha aap aisi koi cheez mat kariye jo mujhe court jane se roke par nahi aap tho MS.ZOYA FAROOQI hai aap kaise peeche hat sakthi hai na..." a very angry asad bursted on zoya 😡

"nahi mr.khan mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap ko alergy hai trust me mr.khan PLEASE "
"TRUST... r u serious ms.farooki itna sab hone ke bawajood aap cahathi mein aap pe TRUST Karoon kal aap ghar jalana chahthi thi aur ab meri jaan lena chahthi hai ... "
"ASAD BAS KARO usein kuch nahi kiya ulta usnein tho thumhari jaan bachayi hai ..."
"haan jammy galti zoya ki nahi hai humne hi bina check kiye zoya uss dish banane ke liye kaha tha iam really sorry "
Asad with a regret on his face said "iam really sorry ms.fa... ZOYA and thank u for saving my life "

ZOYA GAVE A "AAP KABHI NAHI SAMAJ PAYANGE" WALA LOOK AND WALKES AWAY FROM THERE CRYING😭

After some time i.e after every one returned from the court ... [wait wait there is a twist here tthe spark's twist] actually they dont find the doll , RASHID is out as per the court's judjment as there is no pacca proof to prove if rashid is wrong or RIGHT court gave a extension and during this time rashid can stay at home itself ...

NAJMA COMES RUNNING AND ASK'S WHAT HAPPENED AND ASAD GOES INTO HIS ROOM WITH LOT OF ANGER . DILSHAD EXPLAINS EVERYTHING TO NAJMA MEAN WHILE TANVEER ALSO JOINS . After some time everyone assembles in the hall at 6:30pm in the evening except zoya , DILSHAD EAGERLY ASKS NAJMA

"Najma where is zoya is she fine "

NAJMA THROWS A LOOK AT ASAD , WHO IS TRYING TO SHOW THAT HE IS NOT CONCERNED ABOUT ZOYA .

"Nahi ammi jab se app log gaye hai thb se apne kamre mein hai meine bulane ki koshish ki par koi javvab nahi de rahi i think bohat hurt hui hai ..."
"mein jaake dekar aathi hoon ..."

AS SOON AS DILSHAD GETS UP TO GO TO ZOYA DOOR BELL RINGS DILSHAD OPENS THE DOOR AND IS SHOCKED

"Aap yaha ... ANWAR kya sab theek tho hai kya zoya thumhe boolaya "
"SAALAM WALEKUM KHALA KYA MEIN AND...AAR ?"
"HA ha andar aao na mein bhi na, najma paani lekar aao aap baitiye na ZEENAT Nazar nahi aa rahi hain "
"HAAN KHALA WOH GHA MEIN HAI ... WOH KYA HAIN KI..."
"GHAR MEIN HAI MATLAB ..."
"MEIN AAPKO SAB KUCH SAMJHA DOONGA PEHLE YE BATAYIEN KI ZOYA KAHA HAIN "
"MEIN ABHI BOLATHI HUN USE "

DILSAHAD KNOCKS ZOYA'S ROOM DOOR BUT SSHE RECIEVIES NO ANSWER
"Zoya beta deko tho tumhare liye koun aya hai "
A sobbing zoya replies "mujhe kisi se nahi milna hai phoopi aap please jaayiye yaha se "

MEAN WHILE ANWAR WHOS WAITING ANXIOUSLY TO MEET ZOYA CANT HOLD AND SHOUTS

"PRINCESS! PRINCESS!"

ZOYA IN HER ROOM HERE THIS AND GETS UP "JIJU!" opens her door like a strom and runs downstairs all crying and hugs her jiju with lot of pain in her heart

"bas karo princess iam here no need to worry ... ab dekna ..."

BUT ANWAR WAS CUT DOWN BY A CRYING ZOYA SAYING

"Mujhe yaha se le chalo jiju mujhe yaha nahi rehna please yaha sab log mujhe galat samjthe hain mujhe yaha se le ch..alo ..." and she faints
"princess "
"ZOYAAA..." BY DILSHAD NAJMA AND TANVEER
"ZOYAAA " COMES A CONFUSED ASAD RUNNING

EVERYONE IS TRYING TO WAKE UP ZOYA

THAT'S IT FOR NOW MAY UPDATE THE NEXT PART VERRY SOON 😆
Edited by sparky03 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
you are a gr8 writer.i just loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

you are a gr8 writer.i just loved it.

thank u so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..i was shocked twist was awsum
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooow man luvly !!! i wsh iwshhh... ths storyline wld hv bin thr in d shw rathr thn tht stupid 1!!! remove d riters of qh n plzzz u take thier post 😛 welll on a serious note ths ws a magical 1 !!! plzzz plzzzplzzz plzzz update it sooon !!! n plzzz PM me!!!
Edited by taareyzen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb 👏 Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taareyzen

wooow man luvly !!! i wsh iwshhh... ths storyline wld hv bin thr in d shw rathr thn tht stupid 1!!! remove d riters of qh n plzzz u take thier post 😛 welll on a serious note ths ws a magical 1 !!! plzzz plzzzplzzz plzzz update it sooon !!! n plzzz PM me!!!



well thank u for such a great compliment i wish i could replace the writers 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awsome i loved it
continue soon
please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
woah woah never expected such a great reply thank u for all ur love 😃

ASAD AND ANWAR WERE DOWN HOLDING ZOYA

"Najma beta , jaldi jaoon aur paani lekar aao jaldi karo"
"Abhi laati hoon ammi "

ANWAR GRABS THE GLASS AND SPRINKLES SOME WATER ON ZOYA AND TRIES TO WAKE HER UP

"ZOYA! PRINCESS! UTHO PLS"
"Mujhe ya...ha se le ch...lo ji..juuu"
"HAAN HAAN Hum jayange tum utjao pls "

DILSHAD TRIES TO MANAGE AND SAYS
"ASAD JALDI ZOYA KO UTAO AUR ANDAR LE CHALO MEIN DOCTOR KO PHONE KARTHI HOON"

ASAD JUST DOES AS DILSHAD SAYS [Guess y cause he cared for her]
Dilshad and Anwar r trying to call doc but doc is not lifting the phone then tanveer says
"Najma i think , woh kal dopehar se kuch nahi khayi hain na isiliye woh behosh hogayi hain hum jaane kuch baanate hai uss ke liye kuch halka sa thaki woh better feel kar sake"
"haan yahi hoga chalo mein tumhari help karthi hoon"

ASAD CARRIES ZOYA TO HIS ROOM AND PLACES HER GENTLY ON HIS BED , AND TURNS TO GO CHECK DILSHAD IF SHE COULD CALL THE DOC OR NOT BUT NO HE WAS STOPED BY ZOYA , SHE WAS HOLDING HIS COLLAR

"Mujhe yaha se le chalo jiju ... sab galat samjhthe hai mujhe ... MR.KHAN tho khabhi mujhe nahi samjhthe ... i haa...aate u MR.KHAN ... Mujhe yaha se le cha...lo "

ASAD IS STUNNED HEARING THIS ... REMEMEMBERS ALL THE HURTFUL THINGS HE SAID TO ZOYA ... GOES CLOSE TO HER CARESSES HER HAIR WHICH IS BLOCKING HIS VIEW TO SEE ZOYAS FACE CLEARLY

"Zoya mujhe nahi pata ki maine tumhe itna hurt kiya i am really really sor..."

HE WAS CUT DOWN BY TANVEER AND NAJMA
"Bhaijaan hatiye tanveer tum jaake khilao"
"Najma yeh kya hai "
"Bhaijaan mein aapko sab kuch baad mein samjha doongi pls ... aap ammi ke paas jayiye na ... AUR TANVEER TUM KHILAO JALDI KARO PLZZZ"

MEAN WHILE DILSHAD AND ANWAR COME NEAR ZOYA . DILSHAD ASKS FOR EXPLANATION FOR WHAT WAS GOING ON THERE THEN NAJMA TELLS DILSHAD , ANWAR AND ASAD EVERYTHING

"WAIT! Kal doopehar se kuch nahi khayi hai matlab... par kyun y " a worried anwar asks
"woh woh woh actually kya hua" a trying to manage dilshad says giving a 'ab mein kya kahoon"
wala look to asad

"JIJU KUCH NAHI HUA HAI MUJHE IAM FINE " Zoya speaks up suddenly
"Princess! shukar ke allah ka pata hai mein kitna dargaya tha , aur yeh mein kya sun raha hoon tumne "
"Bas aisa hi aap logon ki yaad a rahi thi aur bhook bhi nahi lag rahi thi isiliye..."
"ofoo princess tumhe kitni samjhana padega ki hamari chintha mat karo dheko kya halat banadiya apna"
"thats ok jiju iam fine up [she stands up] see aur tanveer kehna padega that soup was so tasety [says that in zoya's style]"

EVERYONE HAS A RELIEF SMILE ON THEIR FACE BUT ASAD HAS A GREAT REGRET ON HIS FACE , HINDING HIS TEARS WAS STANDING APART FROM EVERYONE

"Chalo zoya apni samman pack karlo we have to go waise bhi ZEENAT akeli hai ghar mein"
"AAPI bhi aayi hai kya tab jo janna padega mein abhi ayi" goes from there without questioning anything more , passes just a few inches , beside asad not noticing him though she knew he was there but dint want to see him , leaving a " yeh kya tha " wala stunned asad behind

DILSHAD SAYS NAJMA TO GO AND HELP ZOYA AND THE OTHERS ASSEMLE IN THE HALL
"PAR ANWAR KAHA JA RAHE HO ... AUR ZOYA KO LEKAR?????"
"HAIN MEIN THO BATAN HI BHOOLGAYA HAMNE YAHI AGLE STREET MEIN EK GHAR LIYA HAIN ... MATLAB MERA FRIEND KA FLAT KUCH DINO KE LIYA KIRAYE PAR LIYA HAIN THO WAHI JA RAHE HAIN"
"PAR TUM SAB YAHI RAH SAKTHE HO NA"
"Nahi KHALA baat 2 ,3 din ki hoti tho reh jaate par ZOYA ka visa 2 weeks khatam ho jaayegi isliye hum ghar lena pada aur woh apna kaam comfortably kar sakthi hain aur jab uska visa khatam hojayega tho ham sab log ek saat new york chale jaayenge"
"yeh bhi sahi baat hain ..."

ASAD IN HIS MIND "WHAT! Zoya jaa rahi hain , uska visa katham hone wala aisa ... kaise ho saktha hai... usne mujhe batya bhi nahi ..."
"NO THIS CANNOT HAPPEN" ASAD SAYS LOUDLY
"Asad tumne kuch kaha "
"nahi ammi bas w..o.oh aise hi"
THIS WAS NOTICED BY ANWAR BUT REMAINED SILENT

THEN ZOYA AND A SOBBING NAJMA COME DOWN

"Tamatar dont cry mein kahi nahi jaane waali hoon yahi hoon jab bhi meri yaad aye na tho phone karo mein ajawoongi "
"par zoya aap achanak "
"Najma use jaane do itni dino baad apne jiju aur aapi se mili hain , aise nahi roka karthe "
dilshad consoles najma
"phoopi iam really sorry mujhe achanak jaana pad raha hai i will really miss u all " and hugs dilshad looks at asad who was standing back and gave a "aap ko kuch farak nahi padtha haina MR.KHAN" wala look
"ok phoopi bye , bye najma , bye tanveer it was a short time with u but it was good spending time with u , u r really verry nice " and hugs her and she could not control her tears
"Zoya , rote nahi kushi khushi bye bolna chahiye , chalo"
"CHALIYE MEIN AAPKO BAHAR THAK CHOD DETHA HOON " SAYS asad who was also expecting a bye

THE THREE START LEAVING THEN SUDDENLY -------- arre princess app log chalte raho mein abhi aya
"par jiju ..."
"KHALA "
"HAAN ANWAR KYA HUA KUCH BHOOL GAYE "
"HAAN , MUJHE AAP LOGON KO INVITE KARNI THI , AAJ RAAT HAMARE YAHA DINNER KE LIYA , ACTUALLY MUJHE LAGA THA ZOYA AAP LOGON SE BOHOT ATTACH HOGAYI HOGI ISSILIYE JAB THAK HAM YAHA HEIN , USKE LIYE YEH ZARRORI HAI KI WOH AAP LOGON KE SAATH ROZ MILTHI RAHE ... I HOPE U UNDERSTAND "
"OF COURSE WE DO ANWAR , HUM LOG AYENGE "

OUTSIDE
"ms.fa... ZOYA "
"yeh jiju ab thak aye nahi ... ha jiju jaldi chalo na mujhe aapi se milna hai "

THEN ZOYA AND ANWAR LEAVE LEAVING A " WHAT WAS THIS AGAIN " WALA ASAD BEHIND

I KNOW ITS MUCH BUT ENJOY N DO COMMENT PLZZZ😆😉

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