my first OS:IS THIS...LOVE updated prt 7 pg8

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Hi this is SPARK's actually a silent reader but wanted to put it down as this one thought is disturbing me a lot .AS FINALLY IAM DONE WITH MY SO CALLED EXAMS I CAN FINALLY DO IT . Some things i want to make clear ----- in this OS u will see a great part of zoya's jiju ANWAR and aapi ZEENAT cause i like all that jiju-saali bonding and about TANVEER wait and watch for her character as the story develops . ok enough of bakwas lemme start

THE EPISODE START'S WITH ZOYA'S RUNNING AWAY FROM THE DINNING TABLE AFTER FACING ASAD'S WRATH FOR THE GAS LEKAGE ---- ZOYA IN HER ROOM IN A CORNER CRYING HER HEART OUT ------------- SUDDENLY SHE HAD A GLANCE AT HER MOBILE WHICH WAS RINGING FROM PAST 30min "Jiju calling"

SHE WIPED ALL HER TEARS AND CLEARED HER THROAT AND FINALLY LIFTED THE CALL
"HELLO"
"Shukar hai ALLAH ka ki thumne phone uta liya u scared the hell out of me PRINCESS y didn't u lift the call for so long is everything fine over there" receiving no reply from the other side Anwar in a very concerned voice asked " PRINCESS r u fine is everything OK zoya "

Hearing to such concerned words and receiving so much of love at that moment , when she needed it the most she was shattered again , this time she could not control her tears

"Princess what happened is everything fine y r u crying like this what happened ZOYA r u there "

Sensing a over concern and tension in her jiju's words she again wiped tears and this time with
a great courage she spoke up with a fake smile

"Relax jiju everything is fine its just ki iam missing u and aapi very much and also there is no progress in finding ABU so i was just upset "

Sensing something wrong in Zoya's voice anwar said

"Ohooo itni si baat PRINCESS dont worry u will find ur abu soon aur hamari fikar mat karo we are fine AND REMEMBER U R IN INDIA ON A MISSION , A MISSION TO FIND UR ABU u better don't forget that and do concentrate on it princess , ok bye iam some important work i need to leave take care zoya ALLAH HAFIZ "

"Jiju aapi ko mera saalam bolna ALLAH HAFIZ"

IN NEW YORK
Anwar and Zeenat were having their dinner then Anwar broke the silence
"Zeenat pack the bags we are going to INDIA there is a flight in 2 hrs so we better make it fast"

ZEENAT WAS UTTER SHOCKED TO HEAR THIS😲

"Y Anwar is everything fine itna suddenly KYUN; is everything fine ZOYA "
"YA YA it's fine i think we should be there with Zoya and help her i talked with her today and she sounded sad so i thought of this and it's a matter of just 2 weeks it's no big deal i guess "
"ya u r right , i will pack up soon and then we will leave "

IN INDIA
YES , jiju was right i have come here to find my ABU i have to concentrate on it and y all of a sudden mujhe MR.KHAN ki baaton se nahi nahi daant se farak padne laga woh tho har baar mujh pe chilathe hai par iss bar KYUN... ya ya ya i got it this it was my mistake i left the cylinder's nozzle open ... par maine check kiya tha it was tight ... khair chodo subah hote hi main sab se maafi mangloongi that too in ZOYA'S STYLE par MR.JAHAPANAAH SIX PACKS ke liya tho kuch khaas karna padega nahi tho woh nahi maanenge ...😳

I THINK IT'S A LOT FOR NOW PLEASE COMMENT I KNOW THODA KHARAB HAI PLS ADJUST KARLO YAAR ... I WILL SEE AFTER READING COMMENTS TO CONTINUE OR NOT😃😆

PART 2 PAGE 3
PART3 PAGE4
PART4 PAGE5
PART5 PAGE6
PART6 PAGE7
PART7 PAGE8
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Posted: 12 years ago
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seem's no one liked it ok its fine mera luck hi karab tha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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areh why R U sad...it was nice continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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continue it re!

its nice :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u i will continue suerly may update 2 more parts today but i have to think😛
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It's very interesting.. Please continue 😊
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Its really nice dear

why r u thinking that it was not good u r written very well

plz continue

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cont soon. It ws nyc. Pm me if possible
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really nice plzz do continue :)
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Continue it!! Its too good! I love it! Please PM me :))) Thank youuu!

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