AsYa SS: Craving For Revenge - Chap 13 -Pg 32

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Chapter 1

"Arrgh! How dare she!? Howww!? I'll have to teach her a lesson.. but first let me deal with Mr Asad Ahmad Khan!" Zoya thought to herself as she started to walk as fast as lightning towards Asad's bedroom.

She flung the door open and rushed inside like a storm, ready to destroy every single thing on its way.

"Mr khan! Where are you? I need to talk to you! Please come out!" Zoya shouted at the top of her voice.

Asad soon came rushing to her like a mad squirrel.

"Miss Farooqui!? What are you doing here at this late hour? You should have been in your room right now. And, may I know why you are making so much noise? Someone might be disturbed in their sleep. Please calm down and go to sleep. We'll talk tomorrow. I've to wake up early in the morning to go to office. Good night."

Asad's answer made her all the more crazier.

"NO Mr Khan! We've to talk right noww! do you get it? Right noww! I just can't wait till tomorrow morning. Okay!" the typical Zoya replied back.

"Okay, tell me.. what's the matter Miss Farooqui? Of what help can I be to you?"

"That rat! arghh!", Zoya started.

But before she could continue her sentence, Asad interrupted her..

"Rat? Where? which rat are you talking about Miss Farooqui?"

"Mr Khaaan! Please stop it! Listen to me carefully!
That...argh.. Oh .whatever.. your so called friend.. how dare she throw all my things out of my room? Seriously? Do you think I'm going to stand there and just watch her do whatever she wants! Oh! Never! ..So.. hell..yeah.. I've come her just to let you know that I'm going to do something about her..so that you don't reprimand me later on for my deeds. Okay. I hope that's clear in your mind.. huh" Zoya said pointing a finger towards Asad.

She didn't realise how close her finger was getting to his lips.. their eyes were locked... Zoya's hair dancing in the wind.. as her finger touched his lips, Asad got into a trance. Zoya quickly removed her finger from his lips,her cheeks burning at the realisation that Asad was admiring her from head to toe.

Waving her hand in front of his face, Zoya awkwardly said :"Hey!? Hey!? you here?"

Asad came back to reality and replied: "Oh..ya.. ya.. so.. what.. were you saying?..ab...about my friend..?"

"Oh! Nevermind! I don't repeat whatever I say.. and I'm quite sure that you've heard what I had told you..so.. there's still time.. okay.. think about that I've told you.. if you want her to come out safe and sound from my.. you know.. umm.. let's say..trap.. then .. just figure out a way to warn her about my abilities..Okay.. good night!" Zoya said with a grin as she left the room, leaving behind a confused Asad.

"Oh no! That girl is dangerous! She can do anything.. absolutely anything to fight for her so called rights.. what should I do now? I'm afraid I'll have to really talk to Tanveer about her." Asad thought to himself.

On the couch in the living room:

"Just wait and what I do to you Miss Tanveer!.. How dare you do this to me? To Zoya Farooqui!? You'll have to pay for what you did... I'll make sure you voluntarily leave your room, seeking for refuge or I'll change my name to "Miss Andha" [egg]!", Zoya thought to herself, crunching on a bunch of potato chips and sipping her favourite red bull drink.

She soon dozed off to sleep, one hand in the potato chips packet and the other one hanging from the couch, nearly touching the marble floor.

***

"Aaahhh!"
The loud scream rang across the living room, awakening everyone in the house, who came rushing to the room.

Dilshad came first, followed by Najma and Tanveer.
Then came Asad.

"Zoya beta! What happened!?"
Dilshad,worry visible on her face, asked a petrified Zoya.

"Phoopi..that.. that thing... "

"What thing?"

"There was a rat in the living room..and..and it brushed against my hand..Phoopi.. please.. look for it..now..and.. throw.. it.. away ..please..or else I won't be able to fall asleep tonight.. please phoopi"
Zoya begged a confused Dilshad.

"Zoya.. calm down.. I'm sure it must have been a bad dream.. don't worry.. just go to sleep..I'm sure you'll be all fine.. I'll be here only with you.. ok beta.. now close your eyes.. shh..shh" Dilshad reassured her, patting her head and comforting her as Asad,Najma and Tanveer looked on.

"What a stupid girl! Some hours before, she was showing off about her abilities and now.. a rat scared her to death.. oh.. and she referred to Tanveer as a rat..huh,. does this symbolise that she'll fear Tanveer in the future? Hah!
Idiot!
Disturbed my sleep because of a rat!"
Asad thought to himself with a disgusted and visibly irritated look and returned to his room.


"What a brat! Spoiled my peaceful sleep! Huh"
Tanveer said to herself, moving towards her room.

Meanwhile, Najma went to fetch a glass of water for Zoya. While she made Zoya drink it, she remarked the beads of perspiration running down her forehead. She couldn't help but think that something was surely wrong. Maybe something was bothering her.. she thought

With Phoopi's magical touch, Zoya soon fell asleep.

PS Sry for spelling mistakes😛😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Adhi Raat ko Cliffy Naainsaaffiii booss!! 😆 🤣

Great one. Continue
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Ohh!!! Yeh rat ka kya kissa hai boss🤣

Sab jagah rat hi dikhai de raha hai🤣 Zoya is too funny. Mere sapno me rat na aa jaaye🤣

Continue soon dear

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interesting... omg rat haha... i thought.. revange is for tanveer coming b/w asya... but room :P continue soon..
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wow lovely update...ha ha zoya calls tanveer a rat n gets afraid after seeing a rat funny add me n plz pm me whn u update nxt waiting for the nxt part
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Chapter 2

As Zoya opened her eyes in the morning, flashbacks of the previous night started to haunt her mind.

"Oh no! Why did I act so stupidly in front of everyone, especially Asad!? Why!? That stupid rat.. ruined everything.. I'll have to take back those words which I've been blabbering to Asad.
I'm afraid I'll have to change my name to "Miss Andha".. Oh no! I'm such a fool!"
Zoya thought to herself.

"Zoya beta, you're already awake. How are you doing now,dear?" Dilshad asked.

"I'm fine, Phoopi. Don't worry about me", she replied back,realising why Dilshad was asking her about her health which embarrassed her.

"Very good! Now go and wash yourself and come down for breakfast," Dilshad ordered.

"Ok Phoopi.. See ya in 20 mins then!"

***

Her jeans,pink top and towel in hand, Zoya wondered as to which bathroom she should go to.

Najma must be in the shower.. and Asad.. it won't be a good idea to use his bathroom without his permission.. and that Rat! Tanveer! She would definitely refuse to let me even in her room so why think about bathroom! huh!.. Zoya thought to herself.

Just as Zoya was about to knock on Najma's door, an idea struck her mind and she stopped midway.

"OH YEAH! Why didn't I think about this before!? This is such a fantastic idea! Wow.. Such a genius I am" Zoya said to herself, a mischievous smile playing on her lips.

***

"Khaaalaaa! Najmaaa! Asaaaddd!" Tanveer cried out as she watched in horror the scene in front of her.

Everybody rushed to her room to find her beautiful pink Chanel handbag infested with what seemed to be cockroaches and some never seen insects.

"OMG! Tanveer! Look at your handbag! this is just disgusting! What happened to it? This is so gross!" Najma exclaimed.

Tanveer looked at her with an "about to cry face".

"Beta, you have no choice but to throw it away. I'll buy you another one from the shopping mall tomorrow.. Remove your important belongings from it and I'll clean them for you", Dilshad told her.

"But Khala.. this handbag... was.. my.. favourite ..one.. what.. should I.. do ..noww..we'll never find a similar one, atleast not in Bhopal.. my best friend gifted this to me from France.. do you know how much it costs?!?.", Tanveer replied in a cracking voice.

"I'm really sorry for you Beta.. but.. nothing can be done now.." Dilshad sadly said.

Asad, meanwhile was sure about one thing. It could only be Zoya's pranks. No one else would come up with such an idea!

Zoya, all the while peeping through the keyhole of Tanveer's bedroom, burst into laughter looking at Tanveer's state.

"This is only the beginning Miss. Rat! You'll have to get used to my pranks from now on..oh.. what a pity.. anyway.. you should've given it a thought before throwing my precious belongings out of your room.. now.. it's your turn to pay for your deeds.. just.. wait..and..watch what I do to you... huh" Zoya thought to herself, giggling.

Holding her head up high, Zoya straightened her body and walked towards Asad's bathroom, this time not bothering about asking for his permission, and got into the white tub, her hair tied up in a bun.

Asad, who was passing by his room, heard someone humming a song. He opened his bedroom door and soon realised that somebody was in the shower. A girl!..

Miss Farooqui!

"What is she doing there? Can't she use Najma's bathroom. I'll have to talk to her. Such a bad mannered girl she is! and on top of that, she ...uff.. what she did with Tanveer was just.. uff.. that girl.. she's a headache!" Asad thought to himself.

"Miss..!"

Just as Asad was about to call her name, the bathroom door opened.

Zoya walked out, her wet hair messy.. wearing a white knee-length dress with a cute teddy bear printed on it.. she looked so beautiful.. with her "innocent" face.. her light make up.. and her fair complexion.. she looked just like an angel.. who came straight from heaven.. her lips looked inviting..her perfect black and round eyes.. the kohl.. the lavender perfume she used filled up Asad's room.. oh..she smells so good..everything looked so perfect..

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Asad couldn't help but stare at her with envy. He just wanted to hug her at that moment and caress her soft cheeks.

Zoya, not realising Asad's presence continued her way..

"BUMP!"

As their shoulders collided, Zoya came to a halt, losing balance.. and was about to fall..when..she felt strong arms around her waist.. holding her.. protecting her..
Their eyes met and they shared an eyelock for Only God knows for how long.

Unknowingly, Asad's finger traced its path down her nose to her lips.. He was leaning in closer to her face when someone interrupted their romantic moment.

Kabab Mein Haddi Tanveer! The Famous MissRat!

"Asad!!" Tanveer called out.

The two lovebirds broke out of their dream world.

"Umm.. Ya.. Miss.. Tanveer.. I'll see you in a while" Asad said, quite embarrassed as he got away from there... from Zoya's sight.

Meanwhile Zoya swore to herself:" You! Miss Rat! Again! You interrupted our romantic moment! you're such a rat! Arrgh! You'll have to pay for this one too!"

Yes, Zoya is falling in love with Asad.. :']

Chapter 3 to be updated tomorrow!


Edited by twinkle_heart - 12 years ago
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Really cute! Enjoyed reading it!
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Rat!! 🤣 zoya is so funny. lol
great update.
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yay!!!
hahaha~~
i love her idea of a revenge!!!
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Nice update!
Zoya's revenge was funny!

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