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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Wow this is amazing one. loved reading it

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

There is no way i m going to hate it. God, i m in love with it. Perfect, will be a understatement. These days Qubool hai has been my soul interest and I actually do not miss a single episode. This couple Asad and Zoya has created a magic and m hooked to them. And, you are the writer who write more on this couple and I love the way you write it. The plot , amazing. This is a Two shot... Why??? Make it more longer , i know you will bring more colors to this couple.

Amazing !!

Please, continue soon!!!

Best of luck for exam!!!

~Dee~

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Oh Gawd. This was awsum. Just cant wait to read the second part. My favourite part was lyke . The very last line of the 'important author's note'
🤣I just died !!

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

nice update dear...thanx fr d pm...

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Very nice part

Loved the jealous

Zoya. Please continue soon

And best of luck for exams

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

KAATAL E NAAMA in Ankie isshtyle.

Hello my peeps! B)

Yayayay finally my deary writes another masterpiece. 😳 😆 😆 🥳

I have a Board Exam tomorrow, yet I'm writing this like a mutt.

What the??!! But yeah thats true, we all are on HIGH when there's exams. Everything pops up in our dimag when there is BOARDS knocking on our face :P 😆 😉

I'm honestly not happy with this. I think it turned out a little crappy. -.- Nevertheless, I wanted to post it!

Why do you think you write bad?😡 its perfect ever! 😳 👏 I am more than ever ready to read your OS/SS/FFs/TS 😆 😆

This is just a tw0-shot, not an SS or an FF, okay guys?

Sone pe suhagaa!!! 😳 😳 🥳

Now, coming to the important part.

LaLaLaLaLaLaLa 😳 😆 😉

This part is dedicated to MissHumptyDumpty!

Haaiyee?? WHHAAATT??!!!

YES, YOU. :D

MEE??!!

*rubs eyes*

*rubs eyes again and again*

I can rubb my eyes and ponder on this later, let me read ahead :P Meri akhen kharab hai :P

I'm sure all you guys have seen and died laughing looking at her memes! She's the absoluteshizz at it! She makes my day with those things. :D

AND she has always supported my writing. I hope you liked this, you!

Our forum is rocking because of people like you. :)

O.o O.o Yeah kya tha?! I mean, i am wordless. You made me cry khushi ke tears. 😭 😭 😭 🤗 🤗

Supported? Well is that even a word? Trust me, YOU ARE A Legendary OS writer yourself. Support is toh Legit. 🤗

And as always, for Monu_Deewani! I can never be angry with you. :) Good luck on that exam!

D3 D3 D3! LOL the best for the exam! Or else to tell an andar ki baat you ke liye AAK ne already ek MANGALPURI GOON fix kar rahi hai :P 😆 😆 😆 BE AWARE.

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Zoya stood by the kitchen island and cut the potatoes.

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Lighting a candle, Phoophi murmured, "Ghost stories."

Reading and reviewing is a must. :D

Please let me know if you find any typo's! I haven't proof-read it.
Love ;)

Ohh goooshh! this is soo much fun! I mean why am i thinking of Planchettee? 😆 😆 And I loved the jealous Zoya. Ahahahahha! Great great great! Not a place where i could find any loop holes. What a Piece. Master piece. 👏 👏 👏

Laooove laaovee in laaove it, if you had no Boards, trust me i would have spammed this in an interval of 30 secs. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

But sabr ka phall sweet hoying! I would rather wait! 😳 🤗

IMPORTANT AUTHOR'S NOTE:

CAST:-

Zoya as Zoya.
Asad as Asad.
Indian Barbie as Tanveer. [Churail-ree 😆 😆]
Dilshad as Dilshad.
Najma as Najma.
Razia as POTATO. [What the?? ahahhahahahaha!!!]

And and and, All the best for your exams, you should be studying not posting! :P
But i know the feeling right, soo yeahh 🤗
And yeah, i know you will get awesomest marks and fly and shine out with the brightest colors! 🤗

but but but Seriously did i read my name correct or is my sight blurry? O.o

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago

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kajenvirman

@kajenvirman

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

i loooved it!! :)

i hate tanveer! ;) hahaha

thanks for the PM

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

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hira

@hiraarif

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

hey! it was super fun.. :D hmm looking forward to ur ghost stories.. :P

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Yikes! This is really good! Great job! 👍🏼 I loved it and this was me the entire time: 😭 poor Zoya!!!

When he called her a stranger I was 😲 🤢

Please post the second part soon! (Thxs for PMing me by the way)!

You know what's really funny: I have become so ridiculously attached to AsYa that this story and others that are similar even yesterday's SBS/SBB/E24 segment broke my heart 🥺The weirdest thing is that I feel as if I am the one being rejected by...him! I am pathetic! 😆