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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

res

unres

the update was simply awesomeee😆🤣🤣

loved each and every part of d update🤣🤣

totally funny🤣

Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Ermagod. Listen. I'm being brutally honest here. I NEVER read Fan Fictions or One Shots. I lose interest half way and click on the exit button. But I swear to God, I read every single line and was HOOKED! How did I not read the first part? = \ DID YOU LINK ME! *Accusing glare*. I was going to demand you to continue and then I saw the 'UPDATED PG 12' and almost killed the mouse by clicking ferociously on the next option.

Now in regards to part two. The only reaction I could form up is ...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

L . M . F . A . O x infinity and beyond! The verbal spar between the two has been the best piece of dialogue I have ever read or witnessed in any drama! YOU are a sheer genius of comedy! Oh my god that was the FUNNIEST Two shot I have ever read! I could picture everything. I legit, spat out my drink when I read that she named the little girl Asad. 🤣

MAKE THIS A TEN SHOT! I demand it !

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: FingerFetish
Ermagod. Listen. I'm being brutally honest here. I NEVER read Fan Fictions or One Shots. I lose interest half way and click on the exit button. But I swear to God, I read every single line and was HOOKED! How did I not read the first part? = \ DID YOU LINK ME! *Accusing glare*. I was going to demand you to continue and then I saw the 'UPDATED PG 12' and almost killed the mouse by clicking ferociously on the next option.

Now in regards to part two. The only reaction I could form up is ...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

L . M . F . A . O x infinity and beyond! The verbal spar between the two has been the best piece of dialogue I have ever read or witnessed in any drama! YOU are a sheer genius of comedy! Oh my god that was the FUNNIEST Two shot I have ever read! I could picture everything. I legit, spat out my drink when I read that she named the little girl Asad. 🤣

MAKE THIS A TEN SHOT! I demand it !

I PROMISE i will give you a longer comment later. :) I'm a wee bit busy. And I will most definitely reply to the mail, soul sister. :D

Now, because you asked. Read the edited Author's Note. :)

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Res.

-Edit-

*growls*

this is why i hate iPods. >:(

i was resing, and was SO CLOSE TO THE GODDAMN POST BUTTON, AND IT WENT BLANK.

IT WAS MUDA FURKING DEAD.

grrr.

eeeks!!!

its 1/3 dedicated to meee <3

thanks love, your amazayn and gawjus too <3 🤣

mah angst 🤣

i bet that your only saying it because you want me to feel good 🤣

to da update <3

LOL, EYE-SEX 🤣

"her name was- ASAD." 🤣

their cute arguments lol 🤣

she grabs his tie.

ooohh, what goin' on 'ere?

🤣

hilarious update love <3

yup it was totally different love 🤣

i was thinking that zoe would be scared and asad will bash tanveer and hug zoe 🤣

thank god you chose somfin els' 🤣

YUS, 3-SHOT!!!!

THANKYU FINGAH FETICH LOVE <3

continue soon love, I LOVE YOU MORE <3

Edited by Irresistible. - 12 years ago

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423728

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: havokhotline

I PROMISE i will give you a longer comment later. :) I'm a wee bit busy. And I will most definitely reply to the mail, soul sister. :D
Now, because you asked. Read the edited Author's Note. :)

You just made my night with that edited note! 😃

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Lol havok I laughed out loud at work!!! Hehe this was brilliant. Glad it's a three shot! (Who cares if its not a word XD)

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: FingerFetish

You just made my night with that edited note! 😃

BECAUSE you asked and BECAUSE I love you. :D Anytime :)

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: delena90
Lol havok I laughed out loud at work!!! Hehe this was brilliant. Glad it's a three shot! (Who cares if its not a word XD)

BWAHAH! :D You did? :D

Thank you so much, Delena! :D

Oui, this is going to have a third and final part. ;P

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

🤣

my stomach and cheek is paining cuzi just cant stop laughing!

the ghost story is actually funny story! omg you've got to update fast fast fast fast fast

i need some time to stop the laughter fit! i'm getting hysterical now! someone pls slap me! 😆😆

its tooo good! 🤣 hume hasa hasa ke marne ka irada hai kya?

can you please pm me when u update?

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: startruck
🤣

my stomach and cheek is paining cuzi just cant stop laughing!

the ghost story is actually funny story! omg you've got to update fast fast fast fast fast

i need some time to stop the laughter fit! i'm getting hysterical now! someone pls slap me! 😆😆
its tooo good! 🤣 hume hasa hasa ke marne ka irada hai kya?

can you please pm me when u update?