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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Well, even though I don't follow Qubool Hai, I had to read this just because it has been written by you!

I'm pretty sure it sounded cheesy, but then it is true. So, anyways coming back to the part!
Needless to say, it was perfect as ever. It was flawless, and I could imagine all that happening, when I pretty much do not watch the serial.
But then, when are you planning to update Knocking on Heaven's Door? I am so very eagerly waiting for you to continue that marvelous story!
All the very best for your Board! Thanks for the PM and Continue Soon! (x

I felt so stupid and guilty after reading your comment! I honestly dont know what I did to deserve readers like you. :) You're the utter shizz for reading this despite not following Qubool Hai.

I hope this makes you want to follow the show, it's amazing. :D

Wow, I'm so surprised that you followed this despite not watching the show! What creatiity on your part :D

I will continue very soon and let you know. :D

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI
I loved the title and the first part too..btw loved tanveer's name indian barbie..😆 And razia potato 🤣..oh im excited for this ghost wala story.continue!

YOU ALWAYS COMMENT SO NICELY. :D love you! :D

OMG, you guys are expecting so much from the bhoot part. ;P

I hope I live up to your expectations. :)

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Rushitaa
I like your sense of humor lol
And hopefully we'll get eyesex between the leads in the next the part?

OH RUSHITAA! :D

I missed your writing. :(

Thank you so much for the compliment! :D

Now, the eyesex? Err. Maybe not! :\

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Theking21
Loving it . Do continue soon, it's killing me

KILLING YOU?! OH NO!

NOT GOOD. :P

Haha, I will try. :P

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Manpreet23

@Manpreet23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Eye sex lmao .. continue soon.. :)

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-Fizzi-

@-Fizzi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Hello? I'm back to stalk you till.you update. 😎

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niyoti

@niyoti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

You! Yeah you.. Absolutely loved loved LOVED this first part of the fic.😃

My muse seems to have deserted me at the moment. I totally understand how exam tension can sometimes get creative ideas flowing. I know I'm not supposed to write to distract myself, but sometimes i do. 😛All my fics for Qubool Hai were the result of exam stress.

This had the perfect amount humor. All the things Zoya was doing while thinking of Mr Akdoo Ahmed Khan, the cutting of potatoes with a vengeance, tossing things in the stove to cook them, I can totally imagine a real person doing things like that whilst being lost in their thoughts. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Can't wait for the rest. G'luck with your exams!

Much Love!

Niti

PS: I loved your cast intro. Lol Razia the potato.😆

Edited by niyoti - 12 years ago

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Loved it...really really loved it...and I like the "eye sex" comment. That cracked me up. Poor Zoya; you can really feel her angst, sadness, disappointment and even betrayal. Beautifully captured...but I don't think Zoya should feel guilty because I don't see her taking advantage of Mr. Khan. Instead, Zoya did everything that was right in preventing him from testifying.

I am want more! Gosh, my heart goes out to Zoya here...I want to go and give her a big hug.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Well, I def. plan to wikipedia it at the moment! (x Following, would do after exams! :p Already have one addiction on my list. And you write wonderfully, to have readers like me! :p

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kiran khurana

@.Kiran.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

This was amazing. Poor Zoya. I feel for her. I am already hating that Tanveer girl. I know I shouldn't but I can't help it. Ghost stories? LOL I'll die if Asad tells Ayaan one 🤣