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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ohhh cool! Sooo happy that you got the main idea 🤗 🤗

oooh yay see i'm smart 😆

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Your a great writer. But why so sad:(... Mera asad ko kyun maara.. Anyways great job:)

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Seems like theres only sad OS's these days lol
I loved this one. You are such a great writer.

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farha623

@farha623

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

when two ppl r meant to be together they always will

awesome OS!

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

oooh yay see i'm smart 😆

Yep! No doubt about that 😃

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kandygrover
Your a great writer. But why so sad:(... Mera asad ko kyun maara.. Anyways great job:)

Hehehe! Thanksss! And Asad ko maara tou sath mein Zoya ko bhi tou maara na ta kay Asad kay pass company rahay 🤣

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: QH1fan
Seems like theres only sad OS's these days lol
I loved this one. You are such a great writer.

Aww really?? I'll write a happy one next time 😃

Thank youuu 😳

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: farha623
when two ppl r meant to be together they always will

awesome OS!

Yes I totally agree 😛 Thanks Farha 😳

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Great OS!

The ironic part is, I saw ur OS on the forum and decided to read it; knowing how much of an Amazing writer, you are; and in the middle of reading, i got a sign saying, one pm and when I clicked it; it was your pm for this OS. <--- Does this make sense? 😆 It was a meant to be; for me to read this Great piece of writing!

Back to the OS, it was really written very nicely and it was Sad; but really good! At first, I thought Zoya was ignoring him; but thanks for explaining it. Felt bad for them; but happy that at the end they were back together!

The concept of the story was really clever.

Hope your mood get better and good luck on your exams!

~Sophie :)

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Sia

@SiasCreations

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

This was very touching. At first I was confused but I got it by the time I had finished reading! God, Asad dies after fighting with Zoya? Well at least they're happy together at the end, even if neither is alive. Lovely OS!

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