OS: Forever Together - Page 3

Lovely Os even though I admit that I did get confused towards the end..

Originally posted by: sophie420

Great OS!

The ironic part is, I saw ur OS on the forum and decided to read it; knowing how much of an Amazing writer, you are; and in the middle of reading, i got a sign saying, one pm and when I clicked it; it was your pm for this OS.<--- Does this make sense?😆It was a meant to be; for me to read this Great piece of writing!

Back to the OS, it was really written very nicely and it was Sad; but really good! At first, I thought Zoya was ignoring him; but thanks for explaining it. Felt bad for them; but happy that at the end they were back together!

The concept of the story was really clever.

Hope your mood get better and good luck on your exams!

~Sophie :)

Hahaha! Yep! I made sense 😆 You were destined to read this trash 🤣

Awww thanks Sophie for liking this concept and yeah, my mood is already getting better with all the lovely comments 😳

Originally posted by: .Ghausia.

This was very touching. At first I was confused but I got it by the time I had finished reading! God, Asad dies after fighting with Zoya? Well at least they're happy together at the end, even if neither is alive. Lovely OS!

Aww thank youuu 😳 Asad fights with Zoya in the begining so when his spirit comes back and Zoya ignores him, he keeps thinking its because of their fight 😉

OMG

K I loved the is
Buh I was like where did she take him out as u said he took car keys and stuff buh man as soon as I read zoya came to him after the crash I am oh boy plz don't plzzz don't tell me he's dead
I was so sad buh after when I came out of my sadness I loved it

Done worry lol it wasn't that confusing I liked it

Originally posted by: shabana20

Lovely Os even though I admit that I did get confused towards the end..

Thanks for clearing the confusion & the pm..

Ohhh yes! The ending is a bit confusing! Actually I posted this from my cell and the word limit was running out so the ending is kinda abrupt 😃

Asad and zoya both died!!no problem..at least they are together😆 Keep writing such os's.would love to read them.

Originally posted by: jazmeen

OMG

K I loved the is
Buh I was like where did she take him out as u said he took car keys and stuff buh man as soon as I read zoya came to him after the crash I am oh boy plz don't plzzz don't tell me he's dead
I was so sad buh after when I came out of my sadness I loved it

Done worry lol it wasn't that confusing I liked it

Awww thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Asad and zoya both died!!no problem..at least they are together😆 Keep writing such os's.would love to read them.

Hahahaha 😆 I laughed at your no problem. At least they're together line 🤣 Hey, I'm thinking of converting my Arhi OSs into AsYa with a little changes and posting it here after the exams... Is it a stupid idea? 🤣

YOU KILLED MAH ASAD!!!! :O