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Oishi

@Oishi23

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

This is Sad😭

but u r amazing as writer...

now that its sad..you'll have to write more happy OS on AsYa

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arnjal

@arnjal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

😭 oh my god! i cried so much! O_O
at 1st i thought that he ran after her to save her from getting knocked down...and they both ended up dying...but when i read your explanation! waw!...beautiful!
i loved it! ...omg..i still cant believe that i cried :/

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..vidhi..

@..vidhi..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

it was so sad but nevertheless very beautiful!!!👏

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Reswa

Unreswa😆

You made me cry

They had a fight and Asad met with an accident and then Zoya too

But they finally united in heaven *khushi ke aasoon*

This was such a beautiful work

P.S. Sorry for unresing it so late

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ohhh! I guess this OS can be a bit confusing 😃 Ap kay akduji k sath Zoya ko bi uper bhej dia ta k wo khush rahain 🤣 Aww glad you're happy now 😛

well at first i was like nooo humare akduji nahi mar sakte bt u guys had me lmao. Smita guess wt i have started followin the show all thanks to u. 😃

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Pata tha cheating karegi 😆

Exam time is THE best time to write !

Creativity ubhar ubhar ke bahaar aati hai 🤣

Oye ! I liked it ! And I didn't find it sad, rather, it was kinda sweet.. :D

No, I'm not a freak ! Crazy, you can say :P

P.S. I love you 🤣

P.P.S. I love the OS too 😆

P.P.P.S On phone so no bandars 😛

P.P.P.P.S. Bas, that's about it for now 🤣

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

that was really emotion ..but loved it

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Fari! Souls together this was!!

Gosh I thought he didn't die and all so she realized and came out of the trauma but both die and are united for ever!

Heheh nish nish!

Cheers