OS: Forever Together

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is my first OS on AsYa! It starts from the point where Asad yells at Zoya for keeping him from going to the court. But the concept is totally different ahead. Hope you like it! 😳
A bit sad but Happy Reading πŸ˜‰

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"WHAT IN THE WORLD IS YOUR PROBLEM, MISS FAROOQI?? Why are you always poking your nose in things that don't concern you? Do have ANY idea how important it was for me to testify against my Abbu? He did wrong and he deserved to be punished! But YOU had to think of this stupid plan to keep me away!" Asad's vice-like grip on Zoya's upper arms tightened and she flinched in pain as tears streamed down her cheeks.

She had never seen him this angry before. Anger rolled off his body in waves and his eyes seemed to be spitting fire at her.

"Did my Ammi ask you to do this?"
He spat furiously. On getting no reply from her, his anger heightened if that was even possible. "I ASKED YOU A DAMN QUESTION! ANSWER ME!" He bellowed, shaking her so hard that her teeth rattled. She finally shook her head in negative.

"Please let go, Mr. Khan. You're hurting me."
She whispered and breathed a sigh of relief when she felt his grip slacken but the anger in his eyes refused to go away.

"Miss Farooqi,"
His voice was so low and hoarse that it sounded almost menacing, "YOU'RE THE WORST THING THAT HAS EVER HAPPENED TO ME! I CURSE THE DAY I FIRST MET YOU! YOU HAVE BEEN NOTHING TO ME BUT TROUBLE!!" He released her suddenly, causing her to stumble as he whipped around, grabbed his car keys and stomped out of the room, banging the door behind him. She knew he had gone out on one of his reckless driving sessions to calm down his anger, not caring that it was 1 o'clock in the morning. She tried to ignore the worry clawing at the insides of her stomach.

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Zoya felt her legs gave way and she fell upon her knees heavily, too shocked and grieved to register the pain that shot through her knees on contact with the marble floor.

Finally after a few minutes of shocked silence, tears started cascading down her cheeks and once started, they refused to stop. She clutched the newspaper close to her bosom as she started crying her heart out.

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Asad knew he had to apologize to her. He had crossed all limits this time. He hoped fervently that she would accept his apology though he wasn't sure himself if he deserved it.

He entered his house late next morning and went start to her room. The sight that greeted him made his stomach churn. Zoya looked so worn out and so lifeless! Her eyes were red and puffy as if she had been crying for hours on end. She moved around the room with silent tears still streaming down her face, collecting her things and throwing them in her open suitcase. His heart clenched painfully at the sight.

"Miss Farooqi?"
He called out tentatively but she ignored him completely.

"Umm... I'm really sorry for all the things I said last night. I swear I didn't mean any of it
." His voice was dripping with regret. Again, she appeared as if she didn't even hear him. Though it hurt him, he knew her anger was totally justified.

Completing her packing, she zipped up her suitcase and began examining her passport.

"Please, Zoya! Listen to me. Please don't go! I said I'm sorry and I'll even make it up to you. Anything you want! Anything! But please don't leave. Not like this
." He gulped to swallow the painful lump in his throat but in vain.

Ignoring him as if he didn't even exist, Zoya quietly grabbed her suitcase and made her way out of the room with more tears spilling down her cheeks. How can she act as if he wasn't even there?

"Zoya! Please Zoya!"
He ran after her as she made her way to the front door and stepped out. He saw her take one last look at his house while exiting the gate. Her eyes were so full of anguish that it took his breath away. And then he heard her mumbling something while looking at a newspaper cutting, "I didn't even realize I had fallen for you. And now it's too late. Wish you had given me one chance to tell you how much you meant to me!" Breaking into a fresh round of sobs, she blindly began crossing the road to the awaiting taxi on the other side.

"ZOYAAA! NOOO
!!" He screamed as he saw a trailer coming her way but even then, he knew it was too late. He stood rooted at the spot and scrunched up his eyes painfully hard to avoid looking at the heart-wrenching scene as his legs gave way and he landed on the ground heavily, clutching his head. There was no way on Earth she could've survived that crash. He just lost her forever in front of his eyes!

He felt himself crying but no tears escaped his eyes. By now, a crowd had gathered at the site of the accident, some screaming for an ambulance while others just shook their heads looking sorry and dazed. He wanted to go there and check for himself but his legs refused to support him. He couldn't stand. He couldn't breathe. He couldn't make sense of what had just happened. He was far too shocked.

"Asad?"
He heard a familiar sweet voice reach his ears and he raised his grief-stricken face to find Zoya walking towards him, an angelic smile on her face and a heavenly glow surrounding her that made her look almost ethereal. There wasn't even a single scratch on her body but a mysterious smile played on her lips.

Asad scrambled to his feet, not caring that this didn't make any sense and rushed towards her, gathering her in his arms and hugging her tightly, not noticing the newspaper cutting that lay at his feet with his picture and a huge headline reading,

"FAMOUS INDUSTRIALIST, ASAD AHMED KHAN PASSES AWAY IN A ROAD ACCIDENT LAST NIGHT."

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THE END

Inspired by the song, Someday by Nickleback πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just realized that this OS can be a bit confusing (Of course, considering its been written by me πŸ˜†) Anyways, so let me explain a little as to what actually happens! When Asad goes out at night, he had an accident and he dies! Thats why Zoya's crying while holding that newspaper! And then his spirit comes back and tries talking to Zoya and thats why she's ignoring him cos he's actually not there while Asad keeps thinking she's mad at him because of their fight and in the end, Zoya too has an accident and they're back together! 😳

OMG! I swear it didn't sound this stupid while penning down 🀣 So this isn't actually a sad SAD OS πŸ˜†

I know I'm supposed to be studying but I just had to write something! Its like the most effective stress buster for me πŸ˜›

I wasn't in a happy mood thats why didn't want to write my FF so wrote this one instead! I hope this wasn't so bad cos I don't do serious stuff! Well, not much, I mean! Those who read my work know this well πŸ˜ƒ Anyways let me know how this was 😳

PMs will be sent out later.

And ummm... Sorry for any mistakes! Wrote this in a hurry πŸ˜›

Anyone who still feels like reading my work even after reading this can read my FF here πŸ˜†

AsYa FF: Destinies Intertwined

*EDITED*

THIS OS WON THE BEST ONE SHOT OF THE WEEK in the First Edition of the Newsletter!!! Means SOOO VERYYY MUCHHH to meee! Thanks everyone who liked and commented πŸ€— My Love for all of you increased even more (if that were even possible in the first place) 🀣

Thanksss again πŸ€— πŸ€—
Edited by SmileyStar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my asad!!!!!!!!😭

very very touching but never would i have imagined such a tragic ending...never!

lovely writing but d end just makes u cryπŸ˜’
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

my asad!!!!!!!!😭

very very touching but never would i have imagined such a tragic ending...never!

lovely writing but d end just makes u cryπŸ˜’



Aww I'm sorry for making you cry 😳

But you should be happy na that they get together in the end cos they both died πŸ˜† And that was the reason why Zoya wasn't listening to him cos he died that night and it was his ghost that came back home! OMG! This sounds sooo very stupid 🀣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmileyStar



Aww I'm sorry for making you cry 😳

But you should be happy na that they get together in the end cos they both died πŸ˜† And that was the reason why Zoya wasn't listening to him cos he died that night and it was his ghost that came back home! OMG! This sounds sooo very stupid 🀣

so good u explained it to me...now i feel happy...ur writing is so good...mere akduji itne jaldi upar jaye yeh zara bhi qubool nahi hai mujheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

so good u explained it to me...now i feel happy...ur writing is so good...mere akduji itne jaldi upar jaye yeh zara bhi qubool nahi hai mujheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†



Ohhh! I guess this OS can be a bit confusing πŸ˜ƒ Ap kay akduji k sath Zoya ko bi uper bhej dia ta k wo khush rahain 🀣 Aww glad you're happy now πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its weird and scary but thts wht makes me like it so much hpe to see u write another os soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

its weird and scary but thts wht makes me like it so much hpe to see u write another os soon 😊



Hahaha! I've explained about it a little in the next post cos I realized that this OS was actually quite confusing πŸ˜† Don't worry I don't usually write such stuff! Pehla experiment tha 🀣

Thanks for giving it a read! Will write more in the future Insha'Allah πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmileyStar



Hahaha! I've explained about it a little in the next post cos I realized that this OS was actually quite confusing πŸ˜† Don't worry I don't usually write such stuff! Pehla experiment tha 🀣

Thanks for giving it a read! Will write more in the future Insha'Allah πŸ˜ƒ


but I understood tht Asad got angry with Zoe he walked out on her and drove to his own death then his ghost came back and tried to apologize to Zoe but Asad didn't realize he was dead then zoe confessed tht she loved him to his pic in da newspaper and absentmindedly crossed the road a trailer knocked her down but her ghost united with Asad's ghost πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaggerchick16


but I understood tht Asad got angry with Zoe he walked out on her and drove to his own death then his ghost came back and tried to apologize to Zoe but Asad didn't realize he was dead then zoe confessed tht she loved him to his pic in da newspaper and absentmindedly crossed the road a trailer knocked her down but her ghost united with Asad's ghost πŸ˜†



Ohhh cool! Sooo happy that you got the main idea πŸ€— πŸ€—

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