AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

I LUVD this chapter! All four characters are absolutely hilarious:). Where to start:

Asad - he is too funny in his panic about how to tell his family about his marrying Zoya. And the scene where he thinks about Zoya's beautiful hair and lol "other things" stole my heart and raised my temperature *fanning self happily*

Zoya - mere pyari Zoya:). My heart was breaking for her when she asked Asad if he regrets his decision:(. I think its so cute that she realize the effect she has on Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan hehe. I'm SO excited!! Zoya bought saris. Cannot wait to read what happens when Asad sees her in one:)

Najma and Dilshaad - too cute and loveable as the suspicious baby sister and oblivious mother lol

Cannot WAIT for the next chapter of your fabulous story!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
This was such an excellent update. I loved it
I love how you really get into the depths of the character's mind

Hey,

Thanks heaps.

I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: blueflames
wow superb beautiful...👏👏
i totally loved it. Zoya went straight up and proposed Mr khan.,
voila a perfect straight forward zoya and a perfect hero desperately in love, his love is defined by his concern of having zoya's happiness as his priority.
please continue soon

Hi,

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

Makes me really happy to get feedback!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: NVBGKY
This is absolutely wonderful, just happened upon it and read both chapter together. I love how you let us into Asad's and Zoya's inter most thoughts, fears and the turmoil that they are going through with themselves. It was so nice to see Zoya take the first step and ask Asad to marry her. Love how both of them at this point are going into the relationship with the state of mind that this is forever. Anxiously waiting the next chapter.

Hi,

Thanks for your thoughtful feedback.

Asad and Zoya are such complex characters - it's great fun to be probing into their minds from my own perspective.

Hahaha, does that even make sense?

LOL i don't know, but thanks for reading :)

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
read all the 3 parts...superb superb superb!!!!!!!!

cant tell u how awesome it was

Hey,

Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed it :))

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: proshomi
This is just beautiful...Fantastic concept and amzzzing writing style update soon and please do pm me...

Thank you for your kind words.

I'm so happy that you like it :)

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QueenofGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: sammy4u
awesome ff dear
loved it a lot
waiting for dilshad n najma' s reaction to this...
do continue soon...n pm me if you can

Thank you for reading!

Hope to keep you entertained with more soon ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: kshre25
This is a really great fanfic! You are an excellent excellent writer! I hope you haven't forgotten about this story...
Eagerly waiting for an update!

Hi,

Thanks a lot.

Hahaha no, I haven't abandoned it completely yet.

There's still a long way to go ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Akilla
that was soo awesome, ur plot is shaping up great and characterization is beyond adorkable...its no wonder ive sat fighting with my computer for two hours just to get to read the third part
please please pleaseee update and pm mee

Awww, how sweet!

I'm so touched that you've invested so much time and effort to read my work.

Completely flattered.

Also, I agree the characterization is hugely dorky, but then again I'm quite a cheesy writer.

LOL.

Thanks heaps!