AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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Nila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Loved this chapter... your AsYa are a real treat to read. Wonder if Zoya is going to change into one of the sarees she just bought, and what will Asad's reaction be 😳. Looking forward to the next update.

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Akilla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

haai that was more perfect then perfect, i was completely hooked and smiling like a retard at my phone right till the end (which was weird coz i was at a public place) eeepp super fangirling!!!!!!! next part pleeease *holds out bowl just begging for more

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scarletgirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

wow i just loved it...update soon n thnkz for d pm

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Shreyasee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Ok, I think I"m officially obsessed with your fanfic, I've checked almost every other hour to see if you have updated part B. 😆

You could put up a 100,000 word update and I think we'd all read it without getting tired and craving more!

Awesome chapter!!! 😊

Edited by kshre25 - 12 years ago

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...SankaDevi...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

I love ur FF!! Its sooo good!! It always makes me laugh!! Please send me PMs!!😆😆

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irene

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

i loved it...waiting eagerly to know wat other escapades took place before the two of them revealed their decision to dilshaad...

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life4me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

I am really loving your ff. Please update soon.

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

I love this story.. Great job. Continue soon:) n please pm me

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

So excited for the next part. Your writing is sooo descriptive which is my favourite thing about it. You describe asad and zoya so accurately and soo deeply. And i agree with the other person who said this, you use the advantage that writers have of the inner monologue so cleverly and deeply. I actually feel as if everything you describe them thinking is actually what the writers of the show intended for the viewers to grasp. But this is where you hit it out of the park. Superbly done. Anxiously looking forward to your next post <3

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: kshre25
Ok, I think I"mofficiallyobsessed with your fanfic, I've checked almost every other hour to see if you have updated part B.😆
You could put up a 100,000 word update and I think we'd all read it without getting tired and craving more!
Awesome chapter!!!😊

Absolutely true!