AsYa FF - Devotion [Updated Chapter 4B/p24](24/08)

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countingstarz

@countingstarz

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Great update. I can't wait to see how Najma and Dilshad react 😃

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

awesome part dear

loved it

do continue soon

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm sooo enthralled by your writing <3

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varshita nandagopal

@varshificat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Totally loved it can't wait for the next update...

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cheezluver98

@cheezluver98

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Amazing FF!!! 👏 👏 👏 So well written and well thought-out. I could see all this happening in my head, it was so descriptive. It was a treat to read. Eagerly looking forward to the next update! 😆

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

awesome dear

loved reading it

thnx 4 the pm😳😳

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Soumya Singh

@soumyasingh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

yay..!!! you updated...!!!

It was awesome...you write really well...

god i'm so giddy right now...

*jumping with joy* (they should so make a emoticon for that)...

Waiting for your next update...

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Wonderful update Dear...but wish you have described the confusion, incredulity and panic they would have felt after the reality of the decision they made fully sank into them.. you did describe it but the panic part was more about the decision been taken without telling Dilshad and how to tell her..would have loved it if you have written more about their panic regarding the decision itself, thinking that they are going to spend the whole life together and wish it was a bit more emotional, like the first two chapters, which i loved more...still even this chapter was really good and i thoroughly enjoyed it.. waiting eagerly for when Dilshad and Najmas tube light would be on.. .Update part B soon and thanks for the PM.😃

Edited by kaussar - 12 years ago