Teri Aahatein- AsYa OS: Final pt 4-pg 18 - Page 19

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

DAMN!
MUJHE PEHLA RESERVE CHAHIYE THA 😭

Thanks a lot di for fulfilling my wish..
I'm really grateful to you
love u


Edited**

Di ,First of all a very big sorry for posting my comments sooo late here.
I'm doing sit-ups now...Few things came up unexpected in my life and have kept me busy lately.
I'm extremely sorry for the delay in comments.

Hey...I should thank you instead because I was too lazy to write ffs again. You motivated me to. So no sorry worry😃 and studies always come first bachcha😊
You have written this OS on my request and I'm posting my comments sooo late. 😭 I'm feeling really bad about it.I hope you are not annoyed with me. 😕
I don't know how to express my gratitude to you for writing this OS.I've been eagerly waiting for a ff from ur side and finally u fulfilled my wish.A warm hug from my side for this lovely favour.

Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai😃

Now coming to the OS...
I'm always left speechless by your works di and your ffs always leave me mesmerised.I've no words to appreciate this ff.I'm simply spellbound.
First I would like to talk about the song that you have used in the OS.It was an amazing choice and the lyrics fit in as per the situation perfectly...

I wish they use this song in the show because it will fit their situation very well
The concept of Zoe leaving the house and then Asad missing her was quite unique and wonderful.
I loved it how Asad didn't give a thought about the perfectly placed items on the dining table.Dilshad and Najma's amused glances were quite cute in the first part and then Najma's observation was really good.
I liked the way Asad tried to hide his disappointment after hearing about Zoe and Ayaan's engagement but then his sister didn't fail to notice his unhappy face.
You know, even in the show, najma is smarter than we think. She has already made some comments to both asad and Zoya about how she knows what's going on.
Asad taking a round of the guest room was sooo cute.I loved this new side of jahanpanah so much.

Asad's habit of looking at the ear ring of Zoe every morning was described beautifully by you.I really enjoyed the way you have written about Asad's craving for Zoe.He remembered her antics and even smiled.OMG!!! Zille ilahi toh kaam se gaye.lovaria hogaya inhein... 😆
Finders are keepers dialogues was really cool.It was Mr. Khan's silly excuse to keep Zoe's belonging closer... 😉

I hope they use the earring in the show at some point

I was soo happy that Najma found out the secret of the earring and really loved her for approaching Ayaan to make her bhaijaan happy.
The bouquet must have been in total jahanpanah ishytlye coz Zoe got suspicious immediately after she saw it. 😉
Zoe's reaction after reading Asad's name on the bouquet was so heart touching.
I really felt bad for Zoe as she tried to force herself in a relationship after convincing herself that Asad didn't love her.If only she knew how much her jahanpanah is dying for her,she would have never faced such a stage.
Ayaan and Najma's conversation was lovely.I liked the way Ayaan composed himself.Poor guy must have faced a heartbreak for sure.Thank god Najma opened his eyes and he saw that Zoe didn't love him but her bhaijaan.I really felt bad for Ayaan...

Ayaan and najma are their brother's best well wishers

Zoe's fear after seeing Ayaan in her room late evening was quite amusing.She is never afraid of anyone but was skeptical about Ayaan's presence in the room.Love does wonders to people indeed.

That was to show that she is not comfortable getting married to ayaan

Ayaan's confrontation and his unique style was awesome.I liked the way he presented the gift to Zoe.I loved him for sending Zoe to Asad.Zoe was hurt coz of Asad's indifference towards her before she left the house.Uff!! Akdu Ahmed Khan is too much at times.But finally Zoe did what I always expect her to do in the serial.She stood up for herself and went to her zilleilahi.
Asad was frustrated on not finding the earring.Good for him!! Bechari Zoe ko kitna tadpaya usne..
Di you have written this OS in such an interesting manner that I simply can't do justice by my praises in words.
The last part was fabulous.

Najma and Zoe's meeting was very nice.They are just like soul-sisters oops-nanad bhabhi..😆
Asad and Zoe's coffee cup talks are always beautiful and this time I lost my heart.The way Zoe confessed her love to Asad and made him realize that love is meant for everyone was written exceptionally well.
Your imaginative power and writing skills are excellent.
This confession was most unique and marvelous.

aww...thanks Asma. I hope Asya can do the same on the show some day
Asad and Zoe are too much.they confessed their love while bickering with each other.Gosh!!
I liked the way Zoe answered to Asad's remarks in a calm and composed manner.
All the dialogues of this OS were amazing but I loved the most where Zoe told to Asad that love is the second name of Allah.The whole conversation was just amazing..

Finally all the shields around Zille ilahi's heart broke and hats off to Zoe for it.
I was left in awe while reading the whole coffee cup scene.
Asad's naughty lines about asymmetry was really good.The way Asad held Zoe in his warm embrace and whispered sweet words in her ears was a treat to read indeed.
Zoe and her shayari is incredible but I really liked it..
Dilshad and Najma made a very nice entry...
And yes jahanpanah should never ever underestimate his Ms. Farooqui coz she is the best. I feel so proud of Zoe.She will surely convince Siddqui.Jab zille ilahi ko mana liya,toh Siddiqui kya cheez hai 😉

All the 4 parts of this OS were beautiful di.The confession was simply outstanding.I really liked it how Asad first tried to brush away Zoe by being rude at her but then Zoe is Zoe.She finally managed to free Asad off his insecurities and made him confess his love for her . 😉
You are a wonderful writer di...
It's really a treat to read ur ffs.
I love you soo much..
Please keep coming up with more OS/SS if possible.
Take care!

Thanks a ton asma. Loved reading your comments. Made my morning😊 and my cup of coffee more asyalicious😳
Muah!!
🤗

Originally posted by: bheegi