Teri Aahatein- AsYa OS: Final pt 4-pg 18 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu..

"Mr. Khan, aap apne aap ko kab tak hurt karte rahenge? Kya aapne socha hai, jab bhi aap ko dard hota hai, shayad kisi aur ko kahin zyaada chhot pahunchti ho?" Tears welled in her eyes as her fingers caressed his skinned knuckles. "I know you don't believe in love. Lekin aap khuda ko maante hain, tho phir pyaar se kyun mukar te hain? Allah ka doosra naam hi mohabbat hai. Mohabbat Allah ki sab se haseen naimat hai..aur aap is naimat ko thukraana chaahte hain?"

so what was Asad's reply?? fine, he is an introvert but still u should have made him to say something here.. 😔

we didn't get to hear anything from his side.. it was Zoya all the way..

anyways.. I like it.. it was nice and simple.. first time I was reading One Short so all the time I was like.. ye har cheez itni jhatt patt kyun ho rahi hai.. but I guess that's the way it works..

waiting for ur AsYa fanfic.. Thanks!


His reply were his tears. He is a man of few words. That's the beauty of AsYa relationship. They say more in silence than with words.

Yeah, this was a fast old version of ff😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88

this was AWESOME dear...i have been a silent reader all this while...this is my first post and i must say u are a brilliant writer...i didn't post anything till now but ur OS was worth it...👏


Thanks yashasvi. ...that's an honor indeed😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rendezvousvin

Sangeeta.. This was damn good.. hope the CV's take inspiration frm ur story.. it'll be very nice to something of this sort... Loved it completely... Thanks for the awesome SS and I hope that you'll keep coming with many more SS/OS and FF's...


Thanks dear. QH creatives are doing a great job...,I am sure they will give us even better scenes😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mallik4ever

Hi bheegi di, such a nice end to the story. I am now over curious to see the sequence when zoya had to leave asad's house in QH 😊


Thanks malik. She left once he found her abbu. After all, that was her purpose in India.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for updating...:)
the SS is too good ! The song suits perfectly into the situation...!! Loved ur style of writing...the dialogues were just mind blowing...n the story ofcourse ! :))
Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Thanx for updating...:)
the SS is too good ! The song suits perfectly into the situation...!! Loved ur style of writing...the dialogues were just mind blowing...n the story ofcourse ! :)


Thanks aaniya😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm so sorry for not being able to post my comments here di.
You have started this SS on my request,so I really thank you from the bottom of my heart.
I've got a few assignments lined up this week and as soon as I finish them up,I'll be here with a long essay like review.
I'm extremely sorry for the delay.
Take care!
love u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I'm so sorry for not being able to post my comments here di.
You have started this SS on my request,so I really thank you from the bottom of my heart.
I've got a few assignments lined up this week and as soon as I finish them up,I'll be here with a long essay like review.
I'm extremely sorry for the delay.
Take care!
love u


No worries Asma...school comes first😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear
wonderful SS
loved all the updates
very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hello Bheegi di remember me?


Hi Deepa. Of course I remember you. Ae you watching QH?

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