Teri Aahatein- AsYa OS: Final pt 4-pg 18 - Page 17

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

Ah, you're back! And I hope you remember me as well! 😉😆 Aapke FFs/OSes/SS padhne ke liye taras gaye the hum, Di! Aapse bhi raha nai gaya na? Hum sabki favourite jodi ki on-screen fire dekh kar? They remind me SO much of Angad/Kripa! 😳

I was SO super happy to read this that I logged in and posted a comment even though I'm on a hiatus from IF due to work (Shhh😆)

This was so totally brilliant! The perfect mixture of emotions, humour and exceptionally brilliant writing. And all this can only be expected from you! Perfect package, this was! 😆

Please do write more! I did PM you regarding this and meri dua 'Qubool ho gai!' 😆 yes, we're all crazily obsessed with this show and even more so, thanks to amazing writing that goes on in this forum!

Thanks SO SO much once again for writing this amazing little story that makes me fall more for he Black 'n' Bitter Asad Akdu Khan, and the spirited Zoya and the amazing relationship that they share. 😳

-Raina

How can I forget your username. I am a chocoholic too😊 good to 'see' old friends on this forum. I will hopefully start a ff soon...as long as readers like you are there. Thanks Raina.

Originally posted by: ranz

Bheegi, Brilliant! The perfect combination of emotions, humour and awesome writing. The best I have read on this forum! A perfect package, this was! Thankyou so much! Look forward to many more from you!

"Mr. Khan, aap apne aap ko kab tak hurt karte rahenge? Kya aapne socha hai, jab bhi aap ko dard hota hai, shayad kisi aur ko kahin zyaada chhot pahunchti ho?" Tears welled in her eyes as her fingers caressed his skinned knuckles. "I know you don't believe in love. Lekin aap khuda ko maante hain, tho phir pyaar se kyun mukar te hain? Allah ka doosra naam hi mohabbat hai. Mohabbat Allah ki sab se haseen naimat hai..aur aap is naimat ko thukraana chaahte hain?"

so what was Asad's reply?? fine, he is an introvert but still u should have made him to say something here.. 😔

we didn't get to hear anything from his side.. it was Zoya all the way..

anyways.. I like it.. it was nice and simple.. first time I was reading One Short so all the time I was like.. ye har cheez itni jhatt patt kyun ho rahi hai.. but I guess that's the way it works..

waiting for ur AsYa fanfic.. Thanks!