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Tanupreet Kaur

@Aphroditefallen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I know i am new to the Forum bt have been associated with it from the very beginning so Rightfully I could make a request to u all.. There have been more than 164 views but only a handful of u have shared ur views about how u liked or disliked the OS. Since its my first attempt I seriously want ur constructive criticism, It'll help me a lot..:) thanks in advance..😊😛❤️

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Esha Singh

@eshasrk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is brilliant writing...could feel every emotion of AsYa...unbelievable

I so hope that in the show also , Asad realizes his love in the same Dargah where he saw her at first

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kriti

@GroverAddict

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wowww its so good..

please write more...

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Tanupreet Kaur

@Aphroditefallen

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: eshasrk
OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is brilliant writing...could feel every emotion of AsYa...unbelievable

I so hope that in the show also , Asad realizes his love in the same Dargah where he saw her at first

Thanku soo much ESASRK. 😊😛 i hope so too.. ameen !!

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This was beautiful and amazing!!!!!!

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I can't believe this is your first work. The way you portrayed their feelings is just beyond words. The change in their behaviour after the whole Mangalpur fiasco and the way they finally understood this change as love was amazing. Keep writing more. You write really well.

-Diya

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

beautiful...touches ur heart all d way:)

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

First time ? This was just too good- awesome infact.

Loved the details, the heart- wrenching pain for both the hearts and the prayers they let out each other- to belong and be their happiness.

.. really would like a dargah scene once again between Zoe and Asad.

all in all, fab job : )

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Tanupreet Kaur

@Aphroditefallen

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kandygrover
This was beautiful and amazing!!!!!!

thanku sooo much Kandygrover.. 😊

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Tanupreet Kaur

@Aphroditefallen

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: asyaforlife
I can't believe this is your first work. The way you portrayed their feelings is just beyond words. The change in their behaviour after the whole Mangalpur fiasco and the way they finally understood this change as love was amazing. Keep writing more. You write really well.
-Diya

😆thankuuu🤗 seriously.. means alot..

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