OS:Ibaadat - Page 3

Originally posted by: AussieChick

That is gawjus.
Res for a longer comment later love :P

~edit~
First of all, sozza love :P
Hope you forgive me for taking 10 years to unres :P

I had school.
Year 12.
2 days, and I think I'm failing already :P
And then migraines.
Oh gawd.
WHY ME?!

Anyway, to da OS love...
You need to write more.
More as in a fanfiction of 100 parts, and as in a gazillion OS like this one.

You write beautifully love <3

It reminded me so much of the Darga scene at da start of da show, but maybe I think that's what you were aiming for, like showing the differences and other stuff :)
If you don't get what I mean, don't worry love, more than half of da forum is wiv you =)
Imma complicated :P

The last paragraph.
I loved it.

I CAN'T DESCRIBE HOW WELL YOU WRITE!!!!!

Great OS love, and imma hope to see lots more <3
Muah <3

Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..

are you sure your writing something for the first time? :| because this is so beautifully written or should i say soulful<3 i loved how you wrote about both of them their pain, longing and realisation of love..I'd kill to have something like this happen in the show.i can still go on and on, on how beautiful this is (:I hope you continue to write more, you should cause your an amazing writer :)

Originally posted by: janu1610

Awesome