Dil ki baat: Asad's POV Pt 4-pg 16 (Feb 3) - Page 7

Originally posted by: shaz2009

Hi Bheegi!This is the first time I'm reading any of your work and I must say it was a sheer delight to have the priviledge of getting to read something so well and beautifully written.You have written with such precision and given such a clear, concise account of Asad's past and his inner thoughts which is something I would like to see more of in the show.I really liked the fact you gave us a more broader insight into Asad's childhood,his school days...how he was as a kid growing up,his ocd ways and how they actually came about.His thought process of stains and dirt being a symbol of ilfe being stained was a really nice touch by you opening up the doors to get the chance to visibly see the scars,this child had etched in his heart due to the abondonment his father had caused to him,his mum and sister.My heart just wrenched even more than it did in the actual show as you gave us more substance to connect with.Going on to his college days and then giving us an explanation of his well toned body and phisique...lol...thanks we needed some drool substance too!Found that really humorous actually!Jokes apart ,really enjoyed the step by step insight into his life story and I think you really have some food for thought now as you could go and give us your own version of what happens with Asya but from what I've gathered it seems you want to go with what the show is going to go with!? Really think you'd do a fab job giving us your own story to tell as I know you would do wonders !Asad's first meeting with Zoya in the dargah was also very beautifully captured by you,making it easier to visualise Asad's captivation of Zoya's beauty and innocence with their second quick meeting bringing about the change in Asad's view of Zoya completely, was again, written with such concision making it easier to visualize and feel Asad's dissapointment,anger or the judgemental opions he had formed of Ms New York.

Brilliant job Bheegi...everything penned to perfection so far.Please do continue soon and again...please dnt mind!Just a humble request that I would like you to give us your own take of Asya's journey!

Originally posted by: khahani

It's good to be interacting with you again! I thought I would never hear from again ... next time dont disappear without a word!

I have been watching this show but still trying to get in on with the program 😆 finding some of the stuff shown quite morbid :/

...KSG is doing a fine job so don't blame you for getting addicted. I love the female protagonist *a first for me* 😆

Look forward to talking to you ...take care :)

Originally posted by: Aalia_A

...and it just gets better! There was actually a sense of irony in your words that made me appreciate it all the more. Frankly, the Dargah sequence pulled me in, it was aesthetically shot and symbolically loaded and I loved Asad's intro more than that of any other character in the show. But his views and opinions are hard to digest especially when gradually you feel yourself becoming more drawn to Zoya. Right now, his see-saw of emotions represents my love-hate relationship with his character... but that is just surface and it is helpful to see where his turmoil, his distrust is actually coming from.

Btw, I love your writing style. You have a flair for expressing poignancy, irony, and humor in the most understated of ways. And therein, in that subtleness, lies the charm 😳

Also, "I had to sanitize my bedroom after she accidentally settled in my precious bedroom" was 😆

Do I even need to say 'continue soon'? Yes, please. 😃

Edit: And with this post I have become a Groupbie. Yippee!!! 😳

Originally posted by: jasw

Wonderful update, bheegi. Is there some way to see the first 32 episodes? It is not available on youtube in my country. 😒

Originally posted by: janu1610

Bheegi di i missed you n your ff too much, i really loved this story so far but i m missing ur songs in the end .plz add it if u can . i m going to sms to nidha .she'd be delighted to know this.plz update soon.

love

ritu