Dil ki baat: Asad's POV Pt 4-pg 16 (Feb 3) - Page 6

Hey ...

Originally posted by: Peruser

WOW!!

RIGHT ON TIME..CAN'T BELIEVE MY LUCK...

explains Assad's character better then the show

nice update..

Originally posted by: Annu..

how logically is that possible that he has no idea that his mother is a divorcee or not?? 😕

i am asking this coz these all are muslim characters.. if Dilshad got divorced from R, then why she is still longing for him..

Originally posted by: ras224

i must say u r a brilliant writer👍🏼...& whn i say it i really mean it😃...ur writing actually compelled me 2 comment😆...da 2nd part ws fab again & da best thing abt ur writing is u really cn emote feelings through ur words very well wich evry writer cant do so hats off...do cont. jaldi se & bdw wat shall i call u?😳...i'm shormi🤗

Originally posted by: tishma

I realy liked it plz pm me:-D Plz

Look who it is?! Roaming around here has been quite fruitful today ...good to see you back in writing Di :) *here's a virtual hug*

My official entrance on this forum and what better than your thread :)

Thanks gurmeet4drishti and silver fairy.

Originally posted by: khahani

Look who it is?! Roaming around here has been quite fruitful today ...good to see you back in writtng Di :) *here's a virtual hug*

My official entrance on this forum and what better than your thread :)

Originally posted by: bheegi

So happy to 'see' you here. Yes, I am back thanks to KSG and now this serial has become an addiction for me. How have you been? Are you watching QH? I love the story and characterization so far. Hope it can stay barkaraar like this.

Hope to see you more active on this forum. Take care.

It's good to be interacting with you again! I thought I would never hear from again ... next time dont disappear without a word!

I have been watching this show but still trying to get in on with the program 😆 finding some of the stuff shown quite morbid :/

...KSG is doing a fine job so don't blame you for getting addicted. I love the female protagonist *a first for me* 😆

Look forward to talking to you ...take care :)

Hi Bheegi!This is the first time I'm reading any of your work and I must say it was a sheer delight to have the priviledge of getting to read something so well and beautifully written.You have written with such precision and given such a clear, concise account of Asad's past and his inner thoughts which is something I would like to see more of in the show.I really liked the fact you gave us a more broader insight into Asad's childhood,his school days...how he was as a kid growing up,his ocd ways and how they actually came about.His thought process of stains and dirt being a symbol of ilfe being stained was a really nice touch by you opening up the doors to get the chance to visibly see the scars,this child had etched in his heart due to the abondonment his father had caused to him,his mum and sister.My heart just wrenched even more than it did in the actual show as you gave us more substance to connect with.Going on to his college days and then giving us an explanation of his well toned body and phisique...lol...thanks we needed some drool substance too!Found that really humorous actually!Jokes apart ,really enjoyed the step by step insight into his life story and I think you really have some food for thought now as you could go and give us your own version of what happens with Asya but from what I've gathered it seems you want to go with what the show is going to go with!? Really think you'd do a fab job giving us your own story to tell as I know you would do wonders !Asad's first meeting with Zoya in the dargah was also very beautifully captured by you,making it easier to visualise Asad's captivation of Zoya's beauty and innocence with their second quick meeting bringing about the change in Asad's view of Zoya completely, was again, written with such concision making it easier to visualize and feel Asad's dissapointment,anger or the judgemental opions he had formed of Ms New York.

Brilliant job Bheegi...everything penned to perfection so far.Please do continue soon and again...please dnt mind!Just a humble request that I would like you to give us your own take of Asya's journey!