Dil ki baat: Asad's POV Pt 4-pg 16 (Feb 3) - Page 14

I just discovered your story and I love it! It feels like you've put down all of Asad's private thoughts of what we watched on TV. You have amazing talent and I absolutely love your story. Cannot wait for your next update!!

Very nice OS...Loved it a lot...



~JAZ~

Continue... no update for very long time..

Originally posted by: me2you

OH MY GOD!!!

Sangeeta Di, please mujhe zor se ek tapad maro! How could I have missed this?😲 You know I am a HUGE fan of you and, as a fan, it is my duty to read every single thing written by you. Lekin pata nahin kyun, I never saw this work of you.

This is absolutely amazingly well written. I think for me, this is the first time I am reading a story without any dialogues, and who better person than you to do this. You know that I'm in love with your dialogues, but trust me I don't miss it here. You describe everything so beautifully here that you don't feel the need for a dialogue.

Or you going to continue with it or has it ended? I hope not!

Agar nahin hai, tho please update karo. It's something different and new from the other stuff you write, a good variety 😉

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks narges...this was my first attempt at fiction on QH forum. After the slap gate, a lot of people were angry at asad and I abandoned it lolz...i wanted to go into AAK's mind and explain all the scenes. Now looking back, i think AAK did think like this lolz