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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow m excited for asad BF entry ...plz updt soon nd pm me too
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Hi guys, here is part 11. Once again I'm sending PM's to everyone who comments. This is dedicated to everyone who reads and enjoys my story. Hope you all appreciate it...

Thanks

They stood in front of Lucky Singh's Dhabba, the name engraved in wood. The colors taki and flag like cloths, in many different colors, hung on strings atop their heads. They could see people dining, sitting on charpoy cots and a wooden table in front; there was a bon fire in the middle and loud music playing.

Boy: Hello ji'

Both Asad and Zoya looked at him; he looked as if he could be 17 or 18 years old

The guy saw the cast on Zoya's foot

Boy: Arrey yeh kya, bhabi ji ki paer meh chot kaise aayi?

Zoya and Asad shared a look

Zoya: Bhabi?

A woman came behind the boy

Woman: Arrey andar aayi'

She pulled Asad in, with Zoya still in his arms.

Others looked at them with questioning looks; some women covered the eyes of their children. Was it because Zoya was in his arms?

They were sat on one of the charpoy cots.

Asad let Zoya go.

She looked around in amusement; she's never been in a place like this.

The people around went back to their own businesses.

Woman: Meh jaake aap dono ke liye kuch khaane ke liye le aati hoon'

Asad: No it's okay hum sirf-

Woman: Arrey don't worry ji, dinner is on the house

She smiled and walked away

Zoya leaned closer to Asad

Zoya: Mr. Khan, ab kya kare?

She whispered

Asad gave her a glare. He looked at the boy

Asad: Humara gaari kharab ho gaya hai, aap ek mechanic bulah sakte hai?

The boy nodded, but still stood their

Asad: Kya hua

Boy: Kitne saal hue?

Asad: Matlab?

Boy: Shaadi ki?

Zoya, who was still leaning on Asad, almost jumped 50 feet away from him

Asad: What?

Boy: Aap inko apne godi meh leh aayi na, toh iss liye'

Asad mentally face palmed himself.

Asad: Aap jaake ek mechanic ko leh aayiye..

The Boy nodded once again, but this time walked away.

Zoya put her fingers through the looping of the charpoy cot. Only she knew how bored she was. She looked at her partner sitting next to her

He was on his phone and was mumbling to himself

"Stupid phone..No signal ugh! And I'm stuck here with Ms. New York for how long, even I don't know."

He took a glance of her from the corner of his eyes.

She looked up and saw the woman bring out a tray of food.

Woman: Yeh lijiy aap logon ke liye khana.

She placed the plated on the wooden table.

Woman: By the way, my self Mrs. Singh, Luck Singh ji ki, wife

She blushed when she said this

Mrs. Singh: Aur woh ladka jo yahan tha, woh mera beta tha' Veer

Asad: Ji, that's very nice to know

The lady looked at a quiet Zoya and back at Asad

Mrs. Singh: Oh sorry, aap log toh ek dosre ke saath waqt bitana chaati hai, meh bhi na'

She left cursing herself

"Her too? Do we have a sign board that says Look we're married?"

He turned to Zoya

"Is she'blushing?"

Asad: Zoya

Zoya quickly looked at him

Asad: Are you okay?

Zoya nodded.

From a distance someone watched them, and has been watching them since they arrive here. The person was shocked seeing them here, his eyes were wide.

He took out his phone and dialed a number

After a couple of rings someone picked up

Voice: Hello?

Man: hello sir..

Voice: Kaun?

Man: Sir, meh, meh Mustafa

Voice: Mustafa?

Mustafa: Voh, 3 saal pehle aapne-

Voice: Mustafa...tum, tum yahan kyun phone kiya?

Mustafa: Mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Voice: Mehne tumhe pehle hi keh di, mujhe phone mat karo.

Mustafa: Par sir it's very important.

Voice: Bolo, kya hai'

Mustafa: Voh.. voh abhi tak zinda hai..

Voice: Kaun, Asad? Meh jaanti hoon, bechara'

Mustafa: Nahi'Imrana

There was silence on the other end.

Mustafa: Sir...

Voice: Yeh kaisa behooda mazak hai?

Mustafa: Meh mazak nah kar rahi hoon..ek minute, meh aapko ek phot bhej rahi hoon

He looked up to the cot they were on, but found it empty'

"kahan gaya?''

He thought

Mustafa: Sir meh aapko baad meh phone karti-

Voice: karna, par ek baat yaad rakhna, muje tumse milna hai'poorni jaagah pe, jahan hum pehele mile thay.

Mustafa: ji sir'

They hung up

Mustafa: Yeh kaise ho sakta hai, I made sure ki'

He looked around and headed to the front

Mustafa: Suniye...wahan jo miya biwi tha who log kahan gaye

Mrs.: Singh looked at the cot he was pointing to and frowned

Mrs. Singh: Kyun?

Mustafa: Baataye na...

Mrs. Singh: Nahi pata

She rolled her eyes and left

Mustafa gritted his teeth and cursed Mrs. Singh under his breath.

He had to find them or else he would be killed himself.

'''''''''''''''

Asad and Zoya entered the room they were told were free for them.

It wasn't grand or fancy, but plain and simple, a bed, a wardrobe, and other necessary things.

Zoya walked in and Asad was about to shut the door, but saw Veer walk up

Veer: Sir, mechanic nahi mil raha hai, bohot raat ho chuki hai, kal subha hi ho payegi'

Asad: Teek hai, tum jao.

'''''''''''''''

Mustafa climbed up the steps, behind him stood veer and Asad and he turned, but Asad shut the door'

Mustufa: yahan kahi hoga.

He moved on.

'''''''''''''''

Asad stood in front of the bed fixing his watch

Zoya: Mr. Khan you know-

She tripped because of her injured foot and banged into him.

Both fell onto the bed with a crash, her on top of him, he was under her.

There was another eye lock.

Her hair fell onto his face, making him take in the smell of her shampoo.

Their faced were inches apart from each other.

"Yup, this feels good..As if I'm looking into'Imrana's eyes... Imrana?"

'''''''''''''''

Mustafa looked through their window, seeing them in this position

" Chi, kaise kaise log hi yaha."

He a made a disgusted face and moved ahead to the next window.

''''''''''''''''...

Dilshaad sat on the couch reading a book.

Najma sat beside flipping through channels.

Suddenly the door bell started ringing

Najma stood up

Najma: Zaroor Bhai aur Zoya honge, pata nahi kahan chali gayi hai

She walked to the door, but when she opened it her eyes were left wide.

Najma: Rohail Bhai!

She almost screamed

Infront of her stood a tall, not to mention handsome fellow

He smiled

Rohail: Miss me?

********

Quick intro:

Rohail Hussain age 23

Best friend of Asad'

Orphan

Dilshaad took care of him as her own son, grew up with Asad

*********

Rohail hugged Najma and entering took the blessings of Dilshaad

Rohail: how's everyone been?

Najma: We're all fine

Dilshaad: Good, aur haan ek kush kabar hai

Rohai: Kya?

Dilshaad: Asad wapas aagaya hai

Rohail's smile was to no bounds

Rohail: kab? Aur kahan hai who?

He looked around

Dilshaad: Bahar gaayi hai' Zoya ke saath

Rohail: Zoya? Who's Zoya?

Dishaad: Behto, batati hoon.

'''''''''''''''''

Both Asad and Zoya moved apart, embarrassed at what just happened.

Asad + Zoya: I'm sorry

They said at the same time and started smiling.

They turned and looked at the broken bed and soon started laughing

Why? Who knows, but they were laughing

Asad stopped laughing seeing her laugh her heart out.

She felt his fingers on her eyes she met his eyes. He moved the hair out of her face, her smile faded.

He leaned in closer, unaware of his surroundings and took her in for a kiss.

She felt his lips on hers'what was happening, why did she feel as if this is wrong, but at the same time very right?

She closed her eyes

"What am I doing?Why can't I stop myself'what are these feeling, dumbass stop yourself!"

He cursed himself mentally, but still kept his lips on hers

What magic was this?

'''''''''''''''..

No precap

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I feel like I wrote for hours, hehe I hope I didn't leave anyone hanging😆

The next part will be updated soon, so please bear to wait

Mean while leave a comment and please do like

Edited by risingsea101 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Update fasttt :P and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Wow that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update ur next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awesome update. Update fast! Please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pata hai I was just thinking about you and going through your FF once again when I got your pm.
You made my morning. Sho shweeet of you.



Wow
This was a super lamba update
I love you for this🤗
So many sequence of events from AsYa landing to a dhabba to someone stalking them to a new entry to a cute romantic bed scene( I mean tutta hua bed scene😆)
Haayo Rabba he kissed her. *dead*
WHat an update!!!! Muaaahhh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
omg they kissed...thanks 4 pm ...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
one question mustfa is a women or the person on phone m confused
but nice part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the pm!
Nice update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
I Loved Please Update Soon.

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